The song I love the most

The lyrics go as follows

Personal Cloud

The clouds soar above the sky,
Just the way I seem high,
When I feel you around my skin.

I just hope that these clouds come near,
and your face never dissapears,
Cause today we can make it,or break it away.

Maybe the rain reminds her of me,
Or is it a smile that she wants to see,
Over and over,I'm thinking today,
I wish I had a cloud which rained all day.

I wish I had a cloud which rained all day.

Close your eyes and Bind your lips,
Tomorrow we might not exist,
Dont let the clouds hinder, the way we feel.

And for days and days alone,
I've seen a rainbow on the hills,
I cant hang upside down,
But I can,stand still.

Maybe the rain reminds her of me,
Or is it a smile that she wants to see,
Over and over,I'm thinking today,
I wish I had a cloud which rained all day.

I wish I had a cloud,which rained all day.

Excellent song, excellent vocals and good lyrics, like it very much...

very thoughtful song well recorded and peaceful
I like this
More please

my praise to the rainstorm is at
http://forum.bandamp.com/Audio_Review/4954.html
same kinda feel

lol

the fish

Like a mantra. Glass of red wine in a garden. Loneliness. Awesome work. My gratitude.

Great recording techniques. A lovely soothing song, well executed.

I think some harmony vox in some places would be really nice.

I like the song much.

Voted

Denis

I liked this one too... but it just doesn't quite develop enough for me. 
I wanted more instruments, drums, electric, bass, keyboard  perhaps to come in from "close your eyes and bind your lips"
You just touch on some vocal harmonies where the voices overlap, and this is a really nice sound; but I agree with Denis that more harmony vocals would sound very nice in this.
This song has massive potential - I think it could be truly excellent, with (to my ear) a little extra work.

I love the repeat of the chords. that d note ( I think it's a d) that keeps ringing throughout the song is hypnotic!  The mix is great.  the intimate vocals help the mood of the song tremendously.  The reverse guitar at the end is a nice touch.  Great song!

BEAU-TI-FUL!
I almost start to cry.
Completely lovely.
You voice sounds really nice here. May be the S sounds a bit loud, but that's easily fixed.
Great job!

          > Iszil

Bring the vocals out of the mix a bit, they're buried at the moment.  Could do with more dynamics... would be kick-arse if you started with some drums about half way through and built it up to a climax.

You make me very jealous. I love the voice effects - how do you do it?

Music - Here's a suggestion that might not be what you were looking for: Drums on the second chorus. To hit it home with more of a loud effect.

Lyrics: The song is really sweet. Iszil's got it right - it's very touching.

Overall, I think this is definitely one of my favorites.

Thanks so much for the experience!

This song is great. I really like your lyrics and how you use them with your vocal line. My g/f will love this song.

A big thank you,to everybody's who has liked the song,and Nausikaa,youre gf will surely like this,even mine did.I thought of using a lot of things,some more instruments,some drums,but nothing worked out,well,i'll just tell you to wait for the original version of this song,this song was an acoustic version of the real song.Till then,keep listening and keep voting .

Awesome song, honestly a hit song in my opinion!
Like Denis mentioned really good recording tech!
The only suggestion would be to clean the hiss or leave the mic open so you don't get the hiss cut offs and use a pop screen for your Vox!!

Hey thanks marino,
Man,I tried using some de-essers,They were just killing the feel of the vocals,next time,I'll sing with a pop-filter.

I don't come here that often, so when I do it always takes quite a while to sift through all the stuff that doesn't catch my fancy before I find an actual SONG.

So for this visit, you had the first. Congrats. This is great.