Another rock song.  I need to change the hook.  It just repeats I'll Get By Without You.

Love Thin Lizzy,This is a really nice track,good song witting skills and performance.The guitar solo sounds like it has no sound body.Are you going straight into a mixing board.Solo is also a little out of tune...I was hopping for a Gary Moore solo when you said Thin Lizzy but Still I wasn't disappointed, good job!!!!!!!!!

briiliant record!!!
like the sounds of the guitars
great vocals
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its long time ago I put a song to my favourites. but this is one I added very quick.
100% vote from me

Triton - Thanks for the kind words!

Marino - You are correct sir!  I am going direct in.  I need to get a good tube amp.  It's on my wish-list!

Thanks for the feedback!

came back to tell that I am going to save this track on a CD playing it in my car
still tapping my feet 

Thanks Triton!  I'm glad you like it!  It's nice to hear this kind of feed back. It motivates me to write more!  I'll have to put some more up. 

Take care!

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In some part of the song you have nice vibrato (e.g. 0.26)
Nice intro. Maybe a bit to “classic” but it could be worked out.

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A really poor drum programming
Vocal is to far in the stereo image
Hard to hear harmonies

Possible Lines

I'll get by without you
Say goodbye and you'll lose
Don't need you to get through
I'll go find someone new
You'll start to miss me soon
It will hurt but it's true
I'll get by without you

Just to help . I love the intro - it's very punkish - which is the style I prefer - but then it's just a sub genre eh?
I will not comment on the rest as, it isn't my style as rockovich said.

HOWEVER,

The melody is really easy listening - a bit too country for my taste - but if its your style it sounds good.
I think you could be louder throughout the song.

Hope that helps a bit.

There's nothing wrong with your hook matey!
It's catchy enough , maybe someone else doing a few of Identityknowns lines over your 'I'll get by without you'?
You could do this one as a male / female duet.

I really like your song, it's very 'easy listening rock'.
I really liked the guitar sound too and the whole rhythm in general, I'm not so much into solos.
I actually like the drum, it's only when I listen to them that the 'same thud' keeps on coming back and is a bit annoying.
And I will agree with rockovich (Hi rockovich!!    ) that the vocal harmonies could be wider.

Hi kings!

vvvvvvvvv good song
i would remix this  though
it sounds a bit flat in my gear!!!!
the bass is non existent,
in fact the whole eq sounds flat .................... i dunno why especially after hearing reviews from triton etc...
sorry

the fish
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