#1July 5th, 2007 · 01:33 AM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Vanilla
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This song is not in a battle


Inspired by the Smashing Pumpkins. Happy with about everything except the vocals (as usual)

Lyrics:
Hold on
Before all is gone
Sterilize your thoughts
Your thoughts
Stay Clear
Keep nobody near
Make yourself
Vanilla

Come down
Get out of the crowd
Keep yourself strange
No more vanilla
Come up
Get yourself unstuck
Keep yourself weird
No more vanilla

They want
Want you to conform
Follow
And be vanilla
They feel
To keep away the fear
To keep you insane
To be vanilla
They need
Need in the machine
Machine your self
And be vanilla
Beware
Beware and prepared
Keep yourself ensnared
And be vanilla

Come down
Get out of the crowd
Keep yourself strange
No more vanilla
Come up
Keep yourself unstuck
Keep yourself weird
No more vanilla

They know
They know a life’s a joke
But they don’t care, they’re just vanilla
I see
I see you’re just a freak
But I don’t care, I’m not vanilla
We need
Need a great crusade
Against the great charade
Don’t be vanilla
Prepare
Like somebody cares
Like somebody wants
No more vanilla

Come down
Get out of the crowd
Keep yourself strange
No more vanilla
Come up
Keep yourself unstuck
Keep yourself weird
No more vanilla
Come down
Get out of the crowd
Keep yourself strange
No more vanilla
Come up
Keep yourself unstuck
Keep yourself weird
No more vanilla

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#2July 5th, 2007 · 02:22 AM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
Chile
Let's see:
That guitar sound awful man, sorry! You just, first try to take off that plastic sound, then compress, equalize and finally adjust the volume and panning.
Vocally, is not bad at all, but there are tuning problems that should be solved; you are not getting to the right tones.
Sometimes I feel the song overall like a mass of sound. Try to work on the equalizing.
BTW; this is not exactly my taste on music.

        > Iszil
#3July 5th, 2007 · 10:39 AM
51 threads / 31 songs
114 posts
United States of America
I like it...

It would be nice if the synth part in the chorus was played on bells.

I have to agree with Iszil, the guitar could sound better, or maybe if you put it lower in the mix some of the other stuff would be easier to hear.

later
#4July 5th, 2007 · 10:41 AM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
What are you talking about? The guitar is the only part I like 
#5July 5th, 2007 · 06:09 PM
12 threads / 7 songs
45 posts
United Kingdom
-I see the influence. I think the guitar sounds cool, sounds similar to the type of tone used in Cherub Rock, or Siva.
-However, the other guys are right, you should bring it down a bit in the mix, and then bring the drums up.
-Vocals sound nice, very Pumpkin-esque.
-Also, bring up the synth in the chorus, and maybe change the drums around, to add more cymbals, then it'll sound more like a chorus. Also, you may want to double the vocals for the chorus. Just things to make it sound more like a chorus. Perhaps, only have one guitar track in the verses, panned centre, then two in the chorus, panned left and right.
#6July 6th, 2007 · 04:57 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
65 posts
Serbia and Montenegro
Hey, nice song, i wonder what vanilla means, is that some expression?
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