Where/s The Sunshine |
The weather in th London is rubbish, it's supposed to be summer, all we got is rain clouds and more rain.
Denis
Denis
Nice tune Denis not one of my favorites or yours but really good one none the less.Love the melody arrangement in the whistling part.Sounds like an old western song meets Celtic feel in a pirate's boat,if that makes any sense.Good sound recording.Hope the weather gets better soon!!!
Cheers
Cheers
Marino wrote…
Sounds like an old western song meets Celtic feel in a pirate's boat,if that makes any sense
Denis : Another wonderful song, you have so many different yet always pleasant styles.
I love it when you 'sing your own song', makes it 'completely' beautiful.
Observations:
- Finally, you started singing again! Nice, crisp harmonies.
- The piratey feel, while fitting for the song, doesn't fit well with that is really mellow instrumentation. Add some depth to the instruments on the lower end of the spectrum to make the song meatier.
- The whistling was downright awesome.
- The bass could use some more attack. And variation, though the whistling parts work alright in detracting attention from it.
- The vocal scatting was pretty great.
- The ending was a little messy--the "hidel-hi-ho" at the end sounded thrown in and the track ended a little abruptly.
- I'd remaster the track--there is a serious hole in the mid-range. Your voice is basically the only mid-range instrumentation. Maybe EQ the rhythm or lead guitars down. Also, add some juice to the bass drum and snare, and ease off the treble on the hat. Run the entire drum set through a compressor.
Reading over the list, it sounds overly critical, but I loved the track.
- Finally, you started singing again! Nice, crisp harmonies.
- The piratey feel, while fitting for the song, doesn't fit well with that is really mellow instrumentation. Add some depth to the instruments on the lower end of the spectrum to make the song meatier.
- The whistling was downright awesome.
- The bass could use some more attack. And variation, though the whistling parts work alright in detracting attention from it.
- The vocal scatting was pretty great.
- The ending was a little messy--the "hidel-hi-ho" at the end sounded thrown in and the track ended a little abruptly.
- I'd remaster the track--there is a serious hole in the mid-range. Your voice is basically the only mid-range instrumentation. Maybe EQ the rhythm or lead guitars down. Also, add some juice to the bass drum and snare, and ease off the treble on the hat. Run the entire drum set through a compressor.
Reading over the list, it sounds overly critical, but I loved the track.
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