not my first song but I think its one of my better ones

This might need a beastie boys remix...

You need to add more instruments and/or vocals... but it's good for your first shot on here.

later

Nice crisp recording.I do hear the metronome but somehow still find it a bit disorganized.Very cool idea of running to different rhythms and molding it into one general sound.Welcome aboard and keep them comming!!!!

to me it sounds very similar to a delayed record or something like latency in recording. I have great problems to follow the bars/beat.
maybe I am wrong.... who knows

IT's a difficult task you set yoursef in that you have two guitar rhythms going, the one on the left pan is more bassy, so I think it should have less notes, play more random,or in the gasps of the ryhthm of the guitar on the right. It's an interesing song, I hope you work on it.

Welcome on board.

Denis

Hey I loved this, it was great, i listened to it the first time with just a right headphone and it was amazing, maybe the bassier guitar is a bit high, either way it was amazing

I like the riffs and think they compliment eachother well, theres just kinda a kink in the timing. Is that the clikc track i faintly hear in the background? dont take it out i dig it maybe if you added some more of a beat in there or increase the volume i think it would further work. Needs a bit of work but I like what your going for. its got an originality of its own.