#1July 1st, 2007 · 11:53 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Avenger 2
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This song is not in a battle


I re-wrote my old song Avenger as a hardcore rock song. The only thing retained from the original is the oboe line, which is played by the lead guitar during the chorus.

Lyrics:
In spite of what I say
I say it every day
I canít get my way
I spite of what I sing
You just canít seem to bring
Yourself to me

Why Canít you listen
Canít you listen to me
Why Canít it happen
Can it happen to me?

In spite of what I want
I canít get any thoughts
Youíre sitting next to me
In spite of how I look
I Get it out a book
You wonít listen

Why Canít you listen
Canít you listen to me
Why Canít it happen
Can it happen to me?


No matter how we talk
Youíll never walk my way
Youíre like some brick wall
Youíre not a thing at all
Just like a stone wall
Youíre just passive

Canít you listen
Canít you listen to me
Why Canít it happen
Can it happen to me?

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#2July 2nd, 2007 · 11:02 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
I love the Idea on the song.The song is well contructed and arranged , the guitar sound is a bit twangy for my taste but the parts are great!!Awesome Job!!!
#3July 3rd, 2007 · 03:38 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,379 posts
United Kingdom
I think the song has real identity. The mix needs a little adjusting, think the drums and bass need to come up, it will support your vox better.

I quite like it.

Denis
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