Okay, this is the very first song I have ever written, I wrote it yesterday, and did some more work on it today.  This still is not the final version, and I dont have it on MP3, so the lyrics will have to do.  This is a slow rock song:

"Your Reality"

Ive been waiting for you for three days now
I start to wonder if anyone cares
Ill take you now if your true

only you can stop my pain (this pain in my heart)

and now…. Now I wait for you
and I. … I know we can be
so if … if you will take me
then I … I will be good to you

only you can stop my pain (this pain in my heart)

Ive been wating for you for three weeks now
I start to wonder if you care
But ill still take you now if your true

Only you can stop my pain (this pain in my heart)

I think about what came between us
I wish we could be the way we used to be
But you slipped back into your own reality

Ive been waiting for you for three months now
I start to wonder why I care
Cuz I don’t think you even care about me


This … this is killing me
I cant stand your new reality




Thats it.  Please let me know if you like it or not.

Damnit! someone respond to this!

I'll respond if you get in mp3 mode! I like it, got any more?

thanks for responding... sorry, I'm leaving tomorrow, so I wanted to know what people think.  Glad you like it, and no as of now there are no others, but Ill have some more soon.  So, what does everyone else think?

uhhh... there is no mp3 on this post... no player... no nothin... hmmmm

I confirm it, it's impossible to hear your sample...

I wrote this little diddy in the car on the way to Houston using a demo version of FL studio in one 20 minute sitting. I am going crazy having not touhed an instrument in a week due to this roadtrip. I can't wait to get home and get my hands on a guitar.

WTF? I posted this as a song, yet it made a reply to someone else. I do not understand 

very groovy i like this, the synthe line melody and the guitar vey nice ,
Its been on bandamp now since almost 2 years now. good luck

just to let you know, this is not by soup, it is by me. The first post and anything above post #8 has nothing to do with the song. There was a very weird error on Bandamp when I uploaded the song, and suddenly replaced this song with mine, and mirrored all the posts from the original thread.

Dude I love this!!Amazing construction of the song.Are you doing the drums on FL ????
smells like talent to me!!!!!!

Yeah Groovy.

Would like to hear some some groovy vox to this.

Bass nice.

Denis

Ha ha ha. It's nice to have you back...

We should really start focusing on live shm (Code name: Carrots on stage)

This song is OK.  Hm... It makes me think. I have nothing else to say.

later

Good lick.. sounds kewl...