Yeah just a song I made. Review Please!

Welcome to The Amp
I think your guitar is overpowering the vocals....
Your Vocals need to be more up front in the mix
The song sounds nice...nice flow
love the additional instrument at around the 1:30 mark
nice ending

Flyer

Thank you Flyer

yeah its an early recording.

Good Job Indeed,very nice song.The vocal mix is a bit clutered  with the guitar,but the crispness is there.The guitar is pretty flowing and well played,nice harm arrangement
Welcome and glad to have you on board!!!
Will keep an ear out for more of your music.

hey thanks yeah i have a couple of of more ready to upload.. with solos and stuff.. hope to hear from you again Marino

WELCOME

real promise here lovely song ............... ok the recording / production has been picked up
you have a great voice and a lyrical style
for a first this is very good indeed...........

more please

swordfish

Thank you Sword fish.. k more on the way

I wish I could understand your vocals better!     You have an interesting voice (in a good way). I really like the transition at 1:35.  This is a really lovely song with great potential, keep working on production!!    Excellent work!

VK

Agree with the comments made already. The only thing I would say to improve, is to play the guitar rhythm more softly.

Nice song and I'm sure you can improve the producion.

Welcome.

Denis