Second Place Science Project. A screw up right before the first chorus. Should have fixed it before I kept going. I wanted to enter the battle, cus why not? My friend said this one is the best one (its my favorite too)

I purposly left out drums, cus not only do I not play drums, I don't think they fit the song (I could have used a drum loop, but meh).

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The song is beautiful! And I think a slight drumming would work (keeping attention on the guitar rhythm, of course). However it sounds good as it is.

Very cool tune. I like it. Some adjustments in the production process would be good. Maybe some more instruments. I like that chorused guitar in the middle.

I love the incomplete and lo-fi feel of this song.
It really brings out the, uhm, highschool like angst.
Don't add drums.
Excellent.

Yeah man, I think you're right, its cool, without the drums.  The acoustic guitar is percussive enough, in fact I think in places its maybe a little too percussive. Overall a good song, however I think the vocals need some polishing. Good work!

I love it
It gives me that Rudy feeling, the song is great as is!
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