#1June 14th, 2007 · 02:58 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Gate
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This song is not in a battle


This is one of those few songs that turned out better than I expected.

Lyrics:
You left your baggage at the gate
Wonít you take me or will you wait
Will you wait

Will you wait
At the gate

We were flying to Boston
On flight six-hundred ninety three
And when we got there it crowded
Will you wait

Will you wait
At the gate

We had a layover in phoenix
Our flight was delayed due to rain
We waited there all the way to nightfall
But you had left your bags at the gate

Nine hours in a 747
You never really care just what youíre weariní
Some say that we should have driven
But I didnít have a car
And I didnít feel like renting one
Will you wait
At the gate
Will you wait at the gate
Will you wait

I hope you wonít forget me this time

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#2June 14th, 2007 · 07:04 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Now this more like it.I see your overall mix is a lot cleaner.Man that voice of yours bro is really cool.Stick with it you might just have what it takes to surprise us all!!!! 
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