This is the song i wrote to go in my music A-level composition portfolio. It's my attempt at a deep, meaningful song. I quite like it, 'specially when the bass and drums come in. Not too happy with the singing, but it was the best i could do at the time.

I'd like to hear what you think of it!

This sounds cool
Can you please post the lyrics ?
I would like to read them...
Thanks

I like the way the song kicks in around 1:25 mark
this has a classic rock sound to it..
Prob why I like it so much..
Your voice goes well with your style..its original...a good thing
Nice intro also

Will Rate

Flyer

Lyrics:

Verse
I'm looking at the world through a mirror, and I like what I see,
Everything is backwards to how it is now, and that's the way it should be,
Maybe i'm just being nostalgic, but I liked how things were,
When we were young and innocent, and couldn't give a care

Chorus
A lot of time has passed since then, and we're never going back again,
It's time to open our eyes and see,
The wonders of the world, the beauties of the earth,
I wish I could make everyone see

Verse
I remember waking up, on sun shiney days,
Jumping out of bed and wondrin' to myself, what adventures i'd have that day,
I'd hang out with my friends, we'd have so much fun,
Oblivious to the evils in the world, that are always going on

Chorus

Bridge
We can all work together, we can all make a change,
Go back to the days when things were right,
We can get rid of this evil, wash it away in the rain,
And live our lives for the best

Solo

i like this alot, nice lyrics. your voice is too deep at some points, maybe at times id like to hear it sung an octave up.
  I really like it when it kicks in,but the bass drum is too loud in the mix, it nearly blows my headphones off, even tho the rest of the song isnt that loud, shud be simple to fix.
 
love the solo, (and the rest of the guitar).

Ian

Cool. I'll sort that out at somepoint. It's hard for me to sing an octave up; My range is rubbish. I'm a bass. However, i'll give it ago.

Nice. Mix could use a little bit of work here and there. Mainly, the drums have a little too much punch.. they're distorting quite a bit.

Cool song.

Yeh, i was going through a "I only use one set of settings, and that's it", which was silly. I'll have a re-record, and remix, hopefully get it to sound better!

Man this is not bad at all! yeah theres some issues here and there including that kick but over all this a good song with a good hook!