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#1June 8th, 2007 · 08:38 AM
64 threads / 13 songs
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United States of America
Elephant Juice w/ PDoll
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This song is not in a battle


A collab with PorcelainDoll.

Did you ever mouth "elephant juice" across the classroom when you were little?

I wrote and played the guitars, and the result is her magic.  The lyrics (as written by PorcelainDoll) are as follows:

And it comes as a surprise,
That you think I'm worth your time,
I'm nothing special,
I'm nothing good.
Oh look at what you've turned me into,
I never thought someone like you ever could.
 
Finding castles in the sky,
And oceans in your eyes,
What have you done boy,
What have you done?
Just look what you've turned me into,
Now I'm all soft and elephant juice.
 
And I know we're not in love...
But you know this elephant juice,
Kinda tastes good.

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Doll, it's been a pleasure.

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#2June 8th, 2007 · 11:47 AM
65 threads / 2 songs
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United States of America
OMG!!!!!  This is like having golded honey poured in my ear!  Doll, you are an angel!  This is so nice.  Im stuttering over here!  This is simply too good in my opinion!  Highest Ratings possible!  Doll, I may be your biggest fan!  Avi, Damnit man! You are good, Son!!!!
#3June 8th, 2007 · 11:58 AM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
You're too kind man, thanks.  But yeah, isn't she incredible? "Now I'm all soft and elephant juice"
#4June 8th, 2007 · 02:23 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
lmao
my brother tought me the elephant juice thingabout a year ago lol
doll your voice is remarkable my dear
and avi you did so great on this!
i love the lyrics
their simple sweet and easy
and the ending vox wow
like a chorus of angels flying over head! its great!
i have nothing bad to say about this man! so great!
cant wait to here more!
#5June 8th, 2007 · 02:47 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
You guys make quite the musical genius team.
 love the tone for the lead guitar
 love the 'ahhhs' at 2.30 (and the singing in general)

 Have you tried a very light snare over the top to see how that sounds. i might suggest strings aswell, but they would have to be real, maybe just a single cellone.  maybe you shoudnt change it cos its already perfect.

  Ian

 btw, whats the deal with elephant juice?
#6June 8th, 2007 · 04:05 PM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
Thanks man.  I appreciate it.

Look in the mirror and say "elephant juice".  What does it look like?
#7June 8th, 2007 · 04:16 PM
37 threads / 19 songs
618 posts
United States of America
this is damn good
PD just needs to get her vocals a little more
articulated, better pronounced and versed.
Her voice is so awesome, she needs to use
it to it's fullest potential... 
 Her voice works very well with the instrumentals,
and the overall mix is great too!

keep it up you two! Great Job!


Blessings,



Blueyes - Danny
#8June 8th, 2007 · 05:18 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Wow this is beautiful guys.Is magical in my honest opinion.
Avi:Guitar arrangement and sound recording is amazing!!!
PD: your lyrics ,harmony and vox are just incredible.
GREAT COLLAB GUYS!!!
This gets the highest vote 100%
#9June 8th, 2007 · 05:26 PM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
I can imagine some kind of 'honey' bass oozing and cruising behind it all!  
A soft bass and the light snare? Mmm! Big Cojones !

Even though it is an Amazing song as it is!
Gets 100% from me if I can get it! lol
Must agree with Blue about PDs voice, you have a unique voice PorcelainDoll, putting a little more clarity in your words ( which are also very good ) would give a vocal such as yours that extra punch! It's not that it needs it, it just would, that's all!

Btw You know what saying 'elephant juice' to your self in the mirror look like? Stupid! lol
#10June 8th, 2007 · 05:33 PM
119 threads / 90 songs
258 posts
United Kingdom
I wasn't to sure I'd done this justice, but I think this is actually my favourite of anything I've been part of!

And...heres some silly pictures of elephants...





#11June 8th, 2007 · 05:37 PM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
HA HA Brings a new meaning to Elephant Juice!!  Girl, you rocked this!
#12June 8th, 2007 · 06:17 PM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
PorcelainDoll wrote…
I wasn't to sure I'd done this justice, but I think this is actually my favourite of anything I've been part of!

I'm honored!

PorcelainDoll wrote…
And...heres some silly pictures of elephants...






Hilarious.
#13June 9th, 2007 · 08:12 AM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
Thanks, Kings, Marino.

A bass? Now that could work.  Maybe when I get back in September.
#14June 9th, 2007 · 09:33 AM
341 threads / 59 songs
4,361 posts
Cymru (Wales)
Are you now 'far away' are you?   
#15June 9th, 2007 · 10:16 AM
64 threads / 13 songs
669 posts
United States of America
Yeah, actually.  I'm in Dubai, and I normally live in Michigan.  That's what, 8000 miles?  Yeah, far :P
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