Collaborative lyrics between Wisdom (initial surge of creativity), alittlepaperdoll and Blueyes (structure)and myself.

I apologize for the relatively poor recording quality, but it's the best I'm going to get given the equipment I have available here.

The song isn't finished--one day I'll record this properly with better equipment, and that day I'll add a chorus I have in my head.

Enjoy.

Man, this is so nice Im almost at a lack for words!  You are ready for the big time my man!  i have nothing negative to say about it! HI RATINGS!

Avi this is awesome man!
Wow this is an awesome collab guys!!
Gets really hi vote this nothing short from excellent

Love the harmony, song structure and arrangements!!

Wow guys, thanks!  I don't know what to say!

very nice laid back song. makes me think of american countryside, sittin on a wooden porch chillin out. I love the harmonizing vocals, not so much the harmonica but thats just my personal taste. 

Ian

Thanks bro!  Thats a very great image.

Hey, this sounds cool!
The simplicity gives it a pretty good touch!
I like the voice duality. That definitely made the song for me.
Great job!

         > Iszil

Thanks, man.  Much appreciated.

Nice work!  It has a very chilled out, Jack Johnson feel.  Jack Johnson being one of my favorite artists, that's a big plus point

It flows very nicely.  All I would say is up the vocals a bit in the mix and maybe give them just a touch more mid range..?

Sounds great, though!

Funny, I told him it sounded like John Mayer. Either way, its a hit man!

When you do record it again why don't you move it up one?
Start with the two voices and come in earlier with the Ooo Ooo's!
Very very very nice song and I love the two voices, you 'go off' slightly at one point but otherwise it's really beautiful.

I agree with Kings in that I really love the double vox.  It give such a nice texture to the song and doesn't overpower the guitar at all.  I like the oohs, too!!!!   I would love to hear this song in its completion. Good work guys!


VK

You going to review everything on the amp VK?  Thanks alot for the astoundingly positive reviews.

I dont think its a bad recording at all
Awesome song
nice harmonica...good lyrics...acoustics
Nice work...Real Nice

Will Rate

Flyer

First thing I thought was "jack johnson" Work on the vocals and thats pretty much "hit" quality. I don't really like the harmonica, it clashes really bad with the rest of this great song. Maybe if you mixed it down and added a filter, it could work.