This song was one that I found almost made itself while I was playing. so I decided to record it. Oh yeah, and, I'm only 14. It's mainly guitar.

love the riff, just makes u want to listen 2 it again. This could be made into a great song with improvement, bit of a nirvana-ish sound, love it. Fantastic work for 14 years old.

I am not sure if you are actually singing anything in particular here.  Your vocals aren't out of tune.  Put some words in there and this is great.

i like it alot. mabye a cleaner guitar sound and a few other instruments wouldnt go astray but otherwise bloody brilliant.

Your guitar is a little muddy, and I can't really understand the lyrics in spots, but with some better recording, would sound great.

One thing to remember: keep strings tuned in. If you don't follow this basic rule, everything will lose impact...

your singings to nasal and not enough from the diaphram, and it sounds like your strumming is a little sloppy, but there are some good ideas, just needs a bit of work and attention

also be confident in your fretting, confidence is very important... i think also writing some lyrics would help, but all in all it sounds like you have a lot of talent as a songwriter, work a little on your playing and singing ability and you'll be a force to be reconed with

I agree with samuel - recording needs to be good for a sood sound production...
guitar music is really good just need decent lyrics and better singing

You've got potential, buddy.  There will always be room for improvement, so keep it up and let's hear some more! 

Guitar is very good. I don't know if you have lyrics or not, I can't exactly tell. Vocals need to be fixed. Everything else is great! Keep up the good work!