Song about the homeless people in the Chicago area.  I see a lot of them and this song came to me.

TheNewIndieKid

Wow man Good!!
This song is really awesome Gets hi rating.Great voice.Get evolved in here man there's all sorts of info from Mic technique to guitar recording technique.You can also collaborate with who ever is interested in doing so.Anyway love this song I was going to critique the recording quality but realized it was life.Very cool,was that an open mic or regular gig in Chicago.
Happy to have you on board

Open Mic in Chicago a place call holiday club. Thanks man your making my head grow.

the musical basics are great
I can hear complete arrangements in this song... do sth with it...

Damn.  I'm not going to lie to you, seeing the description didn't inspire too much in terms of a serious song.  Well done.

Right on keep up the work.

This is what it's all about. Get out there and play your songs for whoever will listen, man. Nice song, nice voice... Keep it up.

Excellent, could you write us lyrics, i couldnt understand the words...

I love the Idea of the song,,,the story/meaning....what your trying to say
I cant make out most of the lyrics


Flyer

Will Rate

its a good acoustic song but i hear too many that sound the same....

Run running away he was scared, of being afraid
Run running away he was shamed, of the man he became

Sit right back and I’ll sing you a song
About a man in a crowd, afraid of himself
He wore a cape and a crown, to cover his frowns
He always looked straight down,
Afraid of the sounds
He never talked out loud, He just mumbles and snarls

He’s in need of a little belief , He’s in need a little more then me
He’s in need of a little belief , He’s in need a little more then me

Run running away he was scared, of the man he became
Run running away he was shamed, of being afraid

Sit right back and I’ll sing you a song
About a man and his pain, from all his mistakes
He always asked for change, with a cup that shakes
He doesn’t know his name, so we called him Jake
He has no place to stay, for heavens sake

He’s in need of a little belief , He’s in need a little more then me He’s in need of a little belief , He’s in need a little more then me

Run running away he was scared, of being afraid

Run running away he was shamed, of the man he became
Sit right back and I’ll sing you a song
About a man in a crowd

The production is a bit away on this song (Ive heard some of your others......ok) you sing flat onto the mike which means Im losin the words...........
I catch the sentiment ...... but like the 6o year song better as the vocals are clearer........
u just a bit 2 close 2 the mike on this one for me.......
still a nice song .................and its live toooooooooo ........cool !!!!

the fish