this was all done in about 20 min/ half a hour, cause i need some kind of crack or something to get my FL out of demo mode.
vocals to come when i get the chance

I love the rhythm and what sounds like guitar, except I think you should keep the pan a bit more settled, perhaps move it about at the end of a verce or chorus, or even in a bridge.

Denis

I find myself agreeing with Denis here..
I think the distorted effects at the intro
are a little much right there.. could better
be served else where in this composition..
now that is just my personal opinion... 
a little clean up and this would be super!


blessings hun,

Blueyes

Was this meant to be 15 seconds long?

Well, whatever I heard, I loved the funky guitar.  The distorted drums didn't seem to fit properly in the start.

I'm going to refresh the page and see if there's any more.

[edit] Yeah, it was just something dodgy going on.  Me likes.