#1May 28th, 2007 · 01:29 AM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Becoming a Machine
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This song is not in a battle


Another drop D song. The melody came to me in my dreams :p

I tried to reduce clipping in this one as much as possible.

Lyrics:
Iím becoming a machine
Even more everyday
Canít you see how
My head is iron
Even more everyday
Canít you see now
Iím becoming a Machine

I used to have some empathy
I used to have some sympathy  for you  But I
 never think about any of that anymore
Cause am I am losing my humanity

Iím becoming a machine
Even more everyday
Canít you see how
My head is iron
Even more everyday
Canít you see now
Iím becoming a Machine
Even more everyday
Canít you see how
My brains cogs
Even more everyday
Canít you see now
Iím becoming machine

I used think I had some emotion
I used think I had some free thought
I used to think I was creative
But now Itís all transistors


Iím becoming a machine
Even more everyday
Canít you see how
My head is iron
Even more everyday
Canít you see now
Iím becoming a Machine


Becoming A machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine

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#2May 28th, 2007 · 07:17 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,802 posts
Germany
nice, nice, nice

music and lyrics fit together

but seriously I am missing something in the song... may be a different structure in the middle or whatever. all in all the song is very good.
#3May 28th, 2007 · 12:59 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
i like it. the atmosphere youve created is great. the lead guitar could be held back a bit to focus on the vox, but everything else is good.

Ian
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