Another drop D song. The melody came to me in my dreams :p

I tried to reduce clipping in this one as much as possible.

Lyrics:
I’m becoming a machine
Even more everyday
Can’t you see how
My head is iron
Even more everyday
Can’t you see now
I’m becoming a Machine

I used to have some empathy
I used to have some sympathy  for you  But I
 never think about any of that anymore
Cause am I am losing my humanity

I’m becoming a machine
Even more everyday
Can’t you see how
My head is iron
Even more everyday
Can’t you see now
I’m becoming a Machine
Even more everyday
Can’t you see how
My brains cogs
Even more everyday
Can’t you see now
I’m becoming machine

I used think I had some emotion
I used think I had some free thought
I used to think I was creative
But now It’s all transistors


I’m becoming a machine
Even more everyday
Can’t you see how
My head is iron
Even more everyday
Can’t you see now
I’m becoming a Machine


Becoming A machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine
Becoming a machine

nice, nice, nice

music and lyrics fit together

but seriously I am missing something in the song... may be a different structure in the middle or whatever. all in all the song is very good.

i like it. the atmosphere youve created is great. the lead guitar could be held back a bit to focus on the vox, but everything else is good.

Ian