This is a song written, played and recorded about 15 years ago.
I still think it's good!!!!
Jim is the magician with the guitar and I kind of sing along!

Here are the lyrics, for those who like to understand!

My love and I

My love and I went flying one day
One day we'll be in paradise
My love and I went flying one day
Across the sea and far away

My love and I had time together
We talked of nothing and the weather
My love and I had time together
We were now never and forever

My love and I walked the green fields
Naturally we let our dreams feel
My love and I walked the green fields
Can't you see the love that is so real?

My love and I went hand in hand
One two three to understand
My love and I went hand in hand
Salt and see the green tree and all the land

My love and I are plane to see
We are all and all are the same
My love and I are planes to see
The peaceful whirlwind is like a flame


And yes it is nice to know what you think!
Yes there are some strange sounds going on , this is recorded from the only tape cassette I have left! So pologies for that but I still think you'll like it !

this is good.. lyrics really express your feeling
and thoughts well....



Bluey

ok its 15 years ago. the sound of it speaks for itself.
but its a really nice song

do you think about a rerecording? would like to hear the vocla line in another way of intonation.

Kings great feel on this.I wished that slap back delay like FX wasn't as present it takes away from your vox definition..The song is really nice man.It definitely takes me somewhere.You got some witting skilz's there fellow
Im loving it!!!

Yo Dudes thanks SO much for the comments.

A re-record? Well yes it would be a possibility but I suppose someone would have to understand the guitar.

Triton I appreciate your wise comments more and more! As I listen there could be 'cassette to PC' discrepancies in the speed of the recording.
It is actually purposely sung in a soft low intonation, but then I was 25, I'm now 40 with a somewhat deeper voice, so if a re-record was done, id still look for the soft low feel. Maybe your hearing a female backing or accompaniment?

...love the lyrics...I can hear a floating female harmony woven around your edgy voice, to soften the edges for this song -- the contrast would be so nice...the guitar is so lovely...