good start |
it's got a good feel but it needs something to fill in that space a little bit more, it's a bit sparse. also the end i think would be better if you sang that last line and then vamped on the main progression and just faded it out. i do like it when the tambourine kicks in somewhere in the middle though, that really helps.
Your vocals are great on this, your accent gives it something more aswell. I can't think of the word.
'But this time I was well prepared, grabbed my broom and swept him away'
Aww poor spider!
I think the piano needs some kind of reverb, maybe even a tiny bit of delay? I'm not sure. And the ending is a bit abrupt. Aside from that, its very good! Very good mixing, vocals recorded really well. Yep, well done
'But this time I was well prepared, grabbed my broom and swept him away'
Aww poor spider!
I think the piano needs some kind of reverb, maybe even a tiny bit of delay? I'm not sure. And the ending is a bit abrupt. Aside from that, its very good! Very good mixing, vocals recorded really well. Yep, well done

odd sounds here, but catchy chords and excellent raegae feel. Just a suggestion: replace that piano with a light organ, and cut the brass completley or replace it with something else.
Very nice bass.
Very nice bass.
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