#1May 22nd, 2007 · 01:24 PM
49 threads / 43 songs
130 posts
Netherlands
Spider
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This song is not in a battle


Here a small remake of the early spider (on which only blueyes replied)

Let me know what you think of this song


Greetings!

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#2May 22nd, 2007 · 01:35 PM
31 threads / 1 songs
434 posts
United States of America
good start
it's got a good feel but it needs something to fill in that space a little bit more, it's a bit sparse. also the end i think would be better if you sang that last line and then vamped on the main progression and just faded it out. i do like it when the tambourine kicks in somewhere in the middle though, that really helps.
#3May 22nd, 2007 · 03:22 PM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
Your vocals are great on this, your accent gives it something more aswell. I can't think of the word.
'But this time I was well prepared, grabbed my broom and swept him away'
Aww poor spider!
I think the piano needs some kind of reverb, maybe even a tiny bit of delay? I'm not sure. And the ending is a bit abrupt. Aside from that, its very good! Very good mixing, vocals recorded really well. Yep, well done
#4May 22nd, 2007 · 06:05 PM
163 threads / 18 songs
2,320 posts
United Kingdom
re: Spider
as a lead / guide track this is cool
i love ska / reggae
its a bit like ' a rat in de kitchen'

tempo on the slow side ......... but what the hell
haha

good production ................... a song to work on

i vote hot

the fish
#5May 22nd, 2007 · 11:28 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
odd sounds here, but catchy chords and excellent raegae feel. Just a suggestion: replace that piano with a light organ, and cut the brass completley or replace it with something else.

Very nice bass.
#6May 24th, 2007 · 05:01 AM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
this is very good fun tune. I dont think i can criticise anything. nice recording and instruments fit well.

Ian
#7May 26th, 2007 · 11:15 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Very nicely put together.I like the feel on the song just find it a bit to midi sounding.But again that aside is a relly cool tune.
#8June 17th, 2007 · 05:11 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Way to go Wiz
this is really good
I think this is your best work to date
Keep it going bro

Flyer
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