Every Lady should have her own song
for her own special Birthday.. So why
not a crooner pulling at your heart strings?

Happy Birthday  Miss Saskia!


blessings,

Danny - Blueyes

Glad you liked it bro..  Hope this
helps Saskia have a happy birthday!


Blessings,

Dan - Blue

What a lovely gesture, I'm sure this has touched the heart strings for the special person you wrote it for.

Blessings are with you.

Denis

Hey man!

It was awesome!! You should have seen the smile on her face when listening to this tune, she thought it was beautiful!

Hope you feel better soon and get your recording studio set up, this song screams to be finished!!!

If I can help you in any way, you know where to find me

The voice is just beautiful, we'll work on timing and building more around it just you had in mind

Greetings!

doors are always open.. feel free to visit on
holiday any time bro...

thanks too!


blessings,

Bluey

classic ballad style
very poigniant

i know it's supposed to be a free flowing song, but i'd still like to hear something beat-oriented behind it... maybe give the strings more movement. take off the DX7. that's just my personal thing, can't stand the DX7 tone

finding a better strings sound would be good too

in the end though, as they say, it's the feeling that counts... i'm sure she'll be pleased as punch with this

wow entheon... 
  I appreciate it bro..  say it's not
bad for a ten minute start to finish
recording huh?  Yea I completely
agree about the strings and the voice
choir sounds..  the grand piano does
come out awful muddled in there to
doesn't it...  will make alot of difference
when I get this mess put together a
little better..
 
thanks guy!!!


blessings,

Dan - Blueyes

Beautiful.

Efverythign is panned to the right, which is a shame. High vote.

need help setting this place up right,
so bad... tried to use an old mono
mixer to be able to hold more then
one instrument at a time, into a
pre-mix.. used monitor out for
the right side and mains out for
the left side.. was getting signal
through the interface in both of the
channels.. right and left.. so not
sure what happened really, but
by the time it turned 3am, being
on a deadline for Wiz, I just left
it..
Thanks for being the one to say
something about it.. even though
we knew. I appreciate someone
noticing and bringing it to my
attention!


blessings,

Dan..

Very nice!!!!
Good intonation(lol)
very well done!!
keep it comin!!
Love always Briss!!
MM

I don't like the string sample--it sounds too artificial and tinny for my likes.

Obvious recording issues aside, this is good--I think you miss a few notes, but no biggie.

The lyrics are very poignant, and the piano is beautiful.

I appreciate your critiques as much as I do
the compliments.. it helps when trying to
put together things for the next attempt...


blessings and thanks again,


Dan - Blueyes

thanks bro.. tha's my grand on the
korg m3r.. I think if I remember
right, the yamaha ts100 has a grand
sound that compares or may even
be just a little better.. has been over
10 years since those pieces have even
seen daylight, much less had power
electricity running through it.. just
wish I could get it all up and running
now.. it's torture to have this caliber
of equipment and just sit and look
at it...  oh well I digress bro.
again thanks for your kind words!

I though I posted here I guess not .Well this is really well written.Vox a bit flat on the hi note (just I tinny bit).Blue maybe drop the key half a step.Recording is preatty clear but it clips a bit but I know you're working on your gear.Are you recording the vox while you play? It sounds like you get close to the mic and then far...
Good job all together!!

Bro, that was awesome!! you have captured
the kind of critique I need.. along with the
other comments, my efforts can take the
exact direction needed!!!

Thanks again and Blessings bro!


Blueyes - Dan