#1May 17th, 2007 · 06:02 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Burner
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This song is not in a battle


Finally, a song I can live with. I think the mix is lacking a bit and its clipping here and there, but overall I was fairly pleased with this song. Expect to hear alot more stuff as the weeks go on, as this is my last week of school.

Lyrics:

Follow me and I will see
Where weíll go
Come with me and we will see
How long it lasts

All I ever wanted was a sign of truth
All you gave me was some kind of youth

You burned me away
You burned me
You earned my trust
And you burned me
You have the blame upon you
You are the flame and  itís not you
You took my hand
And crushed it
You took my mind
And you lost it
I wish I could have seen it
You were a siren

Waiting on the rocks
Waiting on the rocks
Waiting On the rocks

Follow me and I will see
Where weíll go
Come with me and we will see
How long it lasts

All I ever wanted was to love someone
All you ever gave me was just some good fun

You burned me away
You burned me
You earned my trust
And you burned me
You have the blame upon you
You are the flame and  itís not you
You took my hand
And crushed it
You took my mind
And you lost it
I wish I could have seen it
You were a siren

Go away and never come back
Go away and I donít really want you back

I should have seen that you were just a burner
I should have seen that you were just a burner

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#2May 17th, 2007 · 06:15 PM
37 threads / 19 songs
618 posts
United States of America
I Say..
Mickey Dolenz, Michael Nesmith, Davey Jones
and Peter Torch meets the late 80's - early 90's.
  A toe tapper, very good voice, great vocal work,
guitar is solid!!  get's a good score!


Blessings,

Dan - Blueyes
#3May 17th, 2007 · 08:01 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Psychedelic Furs!!
Really like your stuff, you make some wicked music, your texts are 'cool', I just find your vocal delivery a bit mono-tunal, in that you sing the same tune somehow. Kind of up and down!
Excellent song just the same!
I used to like the Psychedelic Furs too!
#4May 18th, 2007 · 06:02 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,802 posts
Germany
I would take out the leading back guitar in the verse to make a clear difference between verse and chorus.
a good song, not my style though

recording quality is good esp. the drums. they are mixed very well
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