#1May 13th, 2007 · 11:59 AM
119 threads / 90 songs
258 posts
United Kingdom
gold stars & certificates
*

This song is not in a battle


I'm sorry I don't qualify
to push your embossed pencils.
I'm sorry I'm not worthy
Of your employee gympass

I'm sorry I'm happy with nothing
It must really piss on your fire to know
Mine burns so much brighter than yours.



[chorus 1]

Some people are afraid to live for more
Than gold stars and certifiactes.
Some people are to scared to feel more
Than their insurance allows.
Some kids get bullied when they stand out
Get a reputation when they drop out
But the smart ones know they're better off.



[Verse 2]

I'm sorry I'm not worthy
Of a tick in your check box.
I'm sorry my story
Lies unread in your inbox

I'm sorry that you can't buy a soul
With a page from your chequebook
Now you're staring blankly
Cause I'm not worthy of my own thoughts.



[Chorus 2]

Some people are afraid to live for more
Than gold stars and certificates
Some people are scared of the world beyond
Magnolia walls
People have a fear of the unknown
When theres no more sign posts
Sometimes you gotta turn off the main road
And become a part of the scenery.

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#2May 13th, 2007 · 12:58 PM
37 threads / 19 songs
618 posts
United States of America
My Son Spoke Up...
He came in the room and listened to
about the last 16 bars.. all I had to do
was look at him and he said "Ok Dad
give it a pretty good vote, I like it,  it's
ok, laid back."
  He's a speed Thrash punk metal fan..
so it sound's like a big compliment to me.
  I agree, it's mellow.. really brings my
stress levels down for the duration of
the song.. Good Job, Good Instrumentals,
Great Vocals and it's really a progressive
idea behind the lyrics.. Yea I'll vote it
favorably..
  PD, You Go Girl!!


Blessings,

Blueyes - Dan
#3May 13th, 2007 · 02:53 PM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
These lyrics are very creative!  I really like this!  As a matter of fact I might actually download this one (which is very rare for me).  Porcelain, cant we get a pic or something?  Would like to put a face with a name.  This is brilliant!  You are on your way for sure! Hi ratings!
#4May 13th, 2007 · 08:27 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
Beautiful song to me.
Like how the vocals and lyrics fit in the music climate, kind of sordid but ironic as well.
Good one!
Geo
#5May 14th, 2007 · 12:43 AM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
wonderful song i say we play this over the loud speakers of most the usa schools :/ theyre really pissing me off latly.. gah any ways onto the song then. wonderful as always i love the melody with your voice. blue is right its way mellow, i really like this pd, its wonderful but then again all your stuff is lol keep it comming!
#6May 14th, 2007 · 03:16 PM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
noooo, it just ended.  . this is ace. very pro sound, and nice harmonizing vocals. no criticism apart from its too short. clever lyrics too.

Ian
#7May 15th, 2007 · 05:31 AM
27 threads / 26 songs
83 posts
Russia
Remarkable work. Deep and professional. My love for vocals! The sound reminds me of "Earthless" of Gintare (EMI). I mean, similar mood. You would love it, I think.
#8May 15th, 2007 · 10:41 AM
50 threads
259 posts
United States of America
There Is Just
OMG!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!
there is something about your
voice or your music or something!!!
but I love the whole song!!!!!!
Its like the story of my life!!!!
But my favorite line is
                          
                              "It must really piss on your fire to know
                                 Mine burns so much brighter than yours."

Did you do all the music
as far as drums guitar and mixing?
VERY GOOD!!!! 5 GOLDEN STARS AND CERTIFICATES!!!!
#9May 15th, 2007 · 04:59 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Wow This a great track indeed.Im always impressed by your music but this tops them all.Longer would be good and a bit more mixing might bring out a bit more separation in the prodduction.Good work gets super vote!!!
#10May 22nd, 2007 · 07:34 AM
23 threads / 14 songs
515 posts
Japan
cool....
i love your style!
very cool and smooth. ... 
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