I really need singing lessons.

Theo this one is not one of my favorites of your songs, but the thing with you is that you can always tell is you and that's a really good thing.You have a definite sound.The mix is also very processed (I think).I do like the song melody Is the quality of the mix maybe what throws me off.Vote for effort and uniqueness!

I like this...  Almost a Coldplay vibe...   The vocals are a lot closer to the mix than alot of what I hear!  Which I have a personal preference for..  I say bring the vox up like a decibel and you're in business...

I do like the song overall. Only the recording sounds a bit off peak, it distorts a little.
Good song
Geo

the music and direction of melody is great but the vocals could use a little tweeking.

i like your musical sound. its very atmospheric. your singings not bad, but perhaps try and sing away from the mic and with a bit more gusto. not that i claim to know anything about singing.

Ian

Interesting song, i like it.....