good song ........... when live . There is usually lyrics but vocalist was away,that is why it gets a bit boring so skip through bits but pleasse leave comments as we are only 14 and need some constructive critism.

keep doing what you are doing, you guys are on the right way

thank u

Definitely needs the lyrics.  Gets repetative without them I think.  As for the music.  Very good.  Especially for only being 14.  Keep it up guys.

Like the "Alex Lifeson" guitar in the middle. Keep at it.,..you sound great.

Not a bad effort guys! Sounds like you had heaps of fun with this one. Needs lyrics for sure, but you've got a pretty cool bass line groove happenin with some fat guitar sounds.  Keep jammin dudes!

I really liked this one. Great song. Maybe the drums saturate on the snare, but i's alright.

good bass but thats it

Excellent work for your ages.  Aren't you all trained in classical music as kids in the UK?  Love the bass work and the strange solo in the middle - it sounds somewhat like Primus's guitarist.  Audio is generally not bad, either, but the guitarist's power chords get a bit sloppy when the drum beat changes about a third of the way thru the track.  Talent and potential is definately present, but not the vocals; what do they sound like?

i think you've got a little way to go before alex lifeson can be used as a basis for comparison (as have we all methinks, the guys a genius in the most subtle of ways) but i definately think that Rush would be a very good musical guide for you, the short snappy and precise section changes in their music helps out budding musicians a hellova lot (i improved LOTS as soon as i started to listen to them) i say this because the sections seem to drag on a bit, but i cant believe i'm saying this to a 14 year old. you've got skills as a musician and you need to direct them...as i say listen to rush. something else i'll say is that you need to think a little more of dynamics and timbre in you're music, the sound creates a repetitive air as much as the sections if you listen to bands like yes, dreamtheater, rush (again), and the cardiacs (although you'll probably never hear of them...i only have one of their cd's because my friend swapped shirts with a crazy lady at a kieth emerson gig...long story) you'll get a much more definate idea of how things should sound...keep it up i'd love to hear you guys after a few years =)

dude I think the name is good and the song is even better.  I am lookin forward to some vocals with this!