I wrote this song for my brother.  I can do a lot better now but I still like it.

it's very nice, keep it on 

I like it..I hope as time goes on, you add some more feeling to it..not so quantized..but you're on the right track. Nice melody

Itīs Kind of mechanic,but I like The chords sequence.I Agree with Chauvette,it needs more feeling,but itīs beautiful!!

Nice, I like it! If you can do heaps better now, I wanna hear it!

maybe too cold feeling... but i like it

you play really well, get yourself a better keyboard though and throw some sustain on the sound try to loosen the feel a little... well done though

yeah, i think a cheap sustain pedal would a OHW (one hit wonder) for this song!  a better keyboard would definitely help give the piano a clearer sound.  i'm also curious to hear something newer (more new? something more new? i have no idea what grammar should look like for this sentence!)

i do not like the keyboard at all, too sythesized. try using a normal piano. add some more instruments in there and youve got a not too bad track