#1June 1st, 2005 · 03:39 AM
14 threads / 13 songs
60 posts
United States of America
Jayhe
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This song is not in a battle


I wrote this song for my brother.  I can do a lot better now but I still like it.

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#2June 7th, 2005 · 03:37 AM
25 threads / 23 songs
127 posts
United States of America
it's very nice, keep it on 
#3June 8th, 2005 · 03:38 PM
14 threads / 12 songs
177 posts
United States of America
I like it..I hope as time goes on, you add some more feeling to it..not so quantized..but you're on the right track. Nice melody
#4June 9th, 2005 · 10:11 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
16 posts
Brazil
Itīs Kind of mechanic,but I like The chords sequence.I Agree with Chauvette,it needs more feeling,but itīs beautiful!!
#5June 12th, 2005 · 08:59 PM
8 threads / 7 songs
113 posts
Australia
Nice, I like it! If you can do heaps better now, I wanna hear it!
#6June 14th, 2005 · 04:11 AM
18 threads / 15 songs
147 posts
Italy
maybe too cold feeling... but i like it
#7June 15th, 2005 · 09:11 PM
8 threads / 3 songs
102 posts
United Kingdom
you play really well, get yourself a better keyboard though and throw some sustain on the sound try to loosen the feel a little... well done though
#8June 16th, 2005 · 10:39 AM
115 threads / 18 songs
1,414 posts
United States of America
yeah, i think a cheap sustain pedal would a OHW (one hit wonder) for this song!  a better keyboard would definitely help give the piano a clearer sound.  i'm also curious to hear something newer (more new? something more new? i have no idea what grammar should look like for this sentence!)
#9June 21st, 2005 · 04:00 PM
42 posts
South Africa
i do not like the keyboard at all, too sythesized. try using a normal piano. add some more instruments in there and youve got a not too bad track
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