#1May 10th, 2007 · 12:28 PM
20 threads / 18 songs
159 posts
United States of America
Your life is gonna change
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This song is not in a battle


In my continuing effort to upload basically every complete thing I've ever done (and hopefully, ultimately, use feedback to inspire me to write again), here's ANOTHER track from a "concept album" I co-wrote with my college roomate in 2002.

The thing this song is most in need of is a re-treatment. The idea wasn't that bad but the execution is horrible. I've since learned to not try and sing so low -- I just can't do it.

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#2May 13th, 2007 · 02:46 AM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
I agree compared to your other songs this can use some vocal changes tuning and melody wise.Harmonies would definitely add to this song too!!!!Thanks for sharing man!
Cheers
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