About my daughter growing up, birth to teens

I 've got two daughter aged 15 and 16, and yes it's not the same when I was changing their nappies.
I take it when the music goes into the rock thing, it represents the teenage era.

Like the tone of the guitar at the start, not sure if I would have chosen a blusey riff to go with the childs voice.

Nice creative piece. good work.

Denis

this shows you have a very good imagination!.
I hear a few cliche licks that sound very similar
to yes and another I just can't place right now..
the same buzz I get in my recordings for now..
 You are good and very talented.. and of course
this review is strictly just my own opinions based
on my own personal tastes..  so the main part
that you should take to heart is the sound buzz -
distortion in the recording..


blessings,

Dan

Is very creative indeed.I wish that buzz in the lead guitar wasn't there is a bit distracting.But this is really nice.

Quite melancholic isn't it?
The music is really good. It has a resemblance of something lost, childhood maybe...then it becomes more chaotic, adolescence perhaps. Yeah maybe you pictured it real

I like the idea behind this, and even though your guitar is beautiful I do find your use of samples a bit 'rough' in that I hear subtler interactions going on between the emotion of the guitar and the story the samples behind try to portray.
I have three (one of which is due end of march next year) young daughters !
Am I to expect such drastic changes into "chaotic adolescence" ??? x3 

Man, you have to tell me where you got the sound effects, there were just awesome!

i was just about drifting off lol to the subtleness and almost eerie  guitar playing...and was then being brought into reality of it all....very effective...this is great...!!!