#1May 6th, 2007 · 11:03 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Dont Call on Me
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This song is not in a battle


Yet another good song is ruined by out of tune guitars.

Lyrics:
When you need me
I'll be there
And when you want me
I'll be near
When you see me
I'm never there
Thought I was gone
I'm everywhere

Don't
Count (call) on me
Don't
Count (call) on me
Don't
Count(call) on me

I'm everywhere
I'm everything
I'm everyone you thought I'm not

Don't
Count (call) on me
Don't
Count (call) on me
Don't
Count(call) on me

When you abuse me
I'll take it in stride
And when you refuse me
I'll never mind
When you want
to push me around
I'll be your carpet
for you to walk down

I'm everywhere
I'm everything
I'm everyone you thought I'm not

Don't
Count (call) on me
Don't
Count (call) on me
Don't
Count(call) on me

When you need me
I'll be there
And when you want me
I'll be near

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#2May 6th, 2007 · 11:26 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Hey Theo good job man.Your sound is pretty cool.Theres a lot going on here as a mix I wish there was a little more separation on it.But is a great piece of work again good job hi vote.!
#3May 7th, 2007 · 08:19 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
Yeah it's a good song, I like it.
Just I think it repeats the 'don't count/call on me' a bit too much.
Cheers
Geo
#4May 7th, 2007 · 10:28 PM
10 posts
Indonesia
agree.........

Don't repeat the 'don't count/call on me' too much.

 

Good job
#5May 7th, 2007 · 10:34 PM
37 threads / 19 songs
618 posts
United States of America
well
as stated prior, to repetitious.  and you already
pointed out, guitars need tuning.. 
 Love the song though..


blueyes
#6May 8th, 2007 · 10:15 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,375 posts
United Kingdom
I think this song has great potential!!

In the chorus I think you should shorten the first Note 'Don't', this will allow the song more breath.
                    
I dissagree with the others in terms of the chorus being too repatative, but I think you should work on the chorus more, so it sounds more different from the verse, I hope this makes sence.

Denis
#7May 8th, 2007 · 05:44 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Thanks guys.

Yes, it is rather repetitive. I was going to add another verse after the first chorus..thing...key..change..thing (B section?) but I ran out of creative juices.

Good advice Denis. I think I will re-record this at a better studio with in-tune guitars soon.
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