this could offend people. i dont like it much.

your shield of faith is full of holes
your sword of truth wouldn't cut through butter
your shield of faith is full of holes
and i don't need your afterlife policy

i'll be fine, in this temple heart of mine
i'll be fine, living a life thats mine

and i don't mean to sound so selfish
but its just the way i am
how can i live in fear of an invisible man
and i don't mean to sound so perverse
its just the way i feel
and i don't need no old book
to show me how to deal.

and you say i'm off the rails
and i need to get back on
but what what you don't realise
we were parallel all along

i'll be fine towing this line of mine
yeah i'll be fine,
this is no picket sign, picket sign.

oh i want to believe...
but theres no room for a girl like me

No offence taken in the slightest, I love your vocals and the change when the drums drop out.

The melody line does go off here and there, but I'm sure you could put that right, perhaps a little tweak on the Eq. Nice job me ol' mucka.

Denis

Electronic sound works well with this.  You're right, some would be offended, but music is an outlet of emotion, whatever that might be.  It's always going to turn a few heads.  Good luck.  Mark

Another good one i see
Just reviewed your other track I like them both.
Nice vox recording
Good vote again

Nice performance, amusing lyrics. I think I like your other new track better, though it has too much repetitions. Still pretty good though, as I've said before your style is rapidly maturing - so keep keeping it up