this is about the most beautiful woman in the universe.

haha the lyrics are really, REALLY good! i hope everybody will get it right ^^
i think the solo guitar is slightly out of tune, but ok...
i love the topic of the song... oh man.. i hope that I DID get it right

I guess I dont get the Yoshiko
thing but other than that it sounds fairly desent.
The mix is a little flat and the solo guitar sound is a little thin for my taste.
You've got a good voice and the song is well put together.
Good Job overall

haha, there's not much to get. Yoshiko's her name.

Hey it sounds like another song started on another page in my browser! lol

Funny song. I like the story and the way you do it, it had to happen! The guitar is a bit off here and there, and you have got a good voice, but it sounds like you could put a bit more expression, in this case, sarcasm, into your voice, because you do have the voice to express!

Sounds like your having fun, OK the production needs working on as previously mentioned, I'm sure you will improve on the production, don't lose the fun element.

Denis

Good voice. The tune reminds me of The Doors. The rhythm could be more accurate for the harmony of instruments. The voice is amazingly good!

Very good job!  I liked a lot the guitar solo sound and melody. It rememberls my playing stile.
The vocals, simply but well.

I enjoy it a lot.

The  most beautiful girl in the universe? Wow...is there the most bautiful girl?...hard to say...anyway, nice try..but I don't think that you will impress with this song, keep trying..

Spoony

hey man tarintino wants you bad.I went with it I think the idea has legs , certainly atmos,

the detuned guitar??? kinda works but there was one note gave me a tooth tingler.
stung by a ginza neon girl huh?
cool song
good luck