#1April 15th, 2007 · 11:30 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
The Great One
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This song is not in a battle


A song of envy. I am not at all happy with the vocals on this one.

Lyrics:
Walk in my shoes
Ride in my car
Eat my lunch
I hope you found something you liked
When you stole my life
Haven’t you heard?
You’re the center of the world
Haven’t you learned
Heaven smiles upon you and not me
Sunrise for you
Rain falls just for you
Nobody talks like you do
I guess that’s why they like you better than me

You are
You are
You are
The great one the great one
You are
You are
You are
The great one the great one

She waves at me
I wave in return
She looks at me strange
And then I know its not me shes waving at
She leaves with you
She leaves me alone
You smile and laugh
And all I can think about is how great you are

You are
You are
You are
The great one the great one
You are
You are
You are
The great one the great one

Better You’re better
Than me

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#2April 16th, 2007 · 06:12 AM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: The Great One
its a very good one 

nice sounds good multi trackin specially vocals.....
a few glitches in the guitar...... but a man on a flying horse might not see them.

trippy well constructed i vote hot

splash the fish
#3April 16th, 2007 · 09:25 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Nice addition of the birds in the background leading into the chorus
this has a slight oldies sound to me
that's a good thing..well to me it is
I would push the guitar lead that your playing through out the song just a tad towards the back some
well done

Flyer

Will rate
#4April 16th, 2007 · 04:13 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
The vox is the best part
I like the vox best. I think that you did such a nice job of recording the vox it was difficult for you to match all the other instruments to it, which is not a bad thing.

Denis
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