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Remixed the song and now sounds cool! Recorded a decent vocals line and fixed some details on drums, guitars and bass.
Lyrics here:
She looks so sexy wearing the tight skirt
And I devour her with my eyes
When she cross the door with that translucent shirt
My heart beats are going mad
You’re my teacher, teach me how to love
I wanna make love to you
You’re my teacher, let me show you what I know
Let’s touch us till the end of this year
Just come close to me, wildly scream ( oh, yeah )
Enjoy my love ( kiss me)
I’m gonna make you dream ( your soft lips)
With the knowledge of my book
I cannot take away my look from her waist
Wanna slide my hands over there
I want to get lost into those blue pearls
She just looks me and I get high
PS: I can't put in the name "School Love Remixed" cause it says I an song with that name already.
Lyrics here:
She looks so sexy wearing the tight skirt
And I devour her with my eyes
When she cross the door with that translucent shirt
My heart beats are going mad
You’re my teacher, teach me how to love
I wanna make love to you
You’re my teacher, let me show you what I know
Let’s touch us till the end of this year
Just come close to me, wildly scream ( oh, yeah )
Enjoy my love ( kiss me)
I’m gonna make you dream ( your soft lips)
With the knowledge of my book
I cannot take away my look from her waist
Wanna slide my hands over there
I want to get lost into those blue pearls
She just looks me and I get high
PS: I can't put in the name "School Love Remixed" cause it says I an song with that name already.
Cool stuff Iszil it reminds me off rush in some parts.I can hear the progressive influences.Good song composition.I also hear the harmony in the vox it sounds really cool but is a little low.The guitar sound is a little to synthetic, it sounds like is going straight to the PC.But your playing is great.Gets Vote!
We'll your already aware of the need to improve the guitar sound, I also think the vox are too bubble gummy (however they are well done) the subject matter needs some raunchy gritty vox..I also think a fat sleazy bass line would help as well...maybe slow grinding power riff break? I really enjoyed the lead in this one..I'm glad you went ahead and did this..I remember reading the original in the lyric forum...caused quite a lil stir...LMAO
Keep on lusting after those older women...I hear they make beautiful lovers... I'm sure you have no idea what I'm talking about..It's an old country song...anyways..cheers!

Iszil, you have developed SO MUCH! Love your handling of the vocals (you've obviously been working allot on that)I can definitely hear your Rush influences in this (but you've carried it further than that). Really Phat sound. Lyric content reflects a classic rock and roll theme ("Hot for Teacher"). This serious rocks, man! Keep it up!
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