#1April 13th, 2007 · 11:37 AM
119 threads / 90 songs
258 posts
United Kingdom
peterpan
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This song is not in a battle


Second upload today! Little music, little voice, big sentimental value.
Made mostly with one shot music box samples and a fuzzy bongo loop off freesound.
I turn 18 in June. Not good...

I dont wanna vote,
I don't wanna pay tax,
I don't want a baby,
I just want my dolls back,
I don't want a villa by the sea,
Just a wendyhouse'll do for me.

Don't want to be an artist,
I wanna colour in,
Don't want to be a part,
Of this mess we're living in
And you can keep your metaphores,
I'll keep the birds and the bees,
You can keep your fake tan,
I'll keep the bruises on my knees.
Keep the brusies on my knees.

All the girls want to be Cinderella,
I'm gonna be Peter Pan.
And If they say I can't do that,
I'll laugh and blow bubbles at them.
All the girls want to be Cinderella,
I'm gonna be Peter Pan.
And If they say I can't do that,
I'll laugh and blow bubbles at them.

A chocolate egg with the world inside...
Grass stains.
Pig tails.
A poweranger with a disney bride...
Play house.
Kiss chase.

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#2April 13th, 2007 · 01:14 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
omfg i love you!
i have this abnormal obseshion with peter pan, so i jumped on this song when i logged onto the band amp home page, and then i just about dies when i relised that you made it
#3April 13th, 2007 · 04:12 PM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,394 posts
United Kingdom
I think your vox have a nice tone. It;s very difficult to get a full tone on the music box. it may sound better if you add say some piano to it. I would like to hear your vox more outward, you have a nice tone as I have said already, keep working at it.

Denis
#4April 13th, 2007 · 05:01 PM
119 threads / 90 songs
258 posts
United Kingdom
alittlepaperdoll wrote…
omfg i love you!
i have this abnormal obseshion with peter pan, so i jumped on this song when i logged onto the band amp home page, and then i just about dies when i relised that you made it

Oh dear, its not like a Micheal Jackson sized obsession with Peter Pan is it? Ha.
I used to have the nickname 'tink' for a while, as in tinkabelle... I dunno why. Anyway...
#5April 13th, 2007 · 06:22 PM
119 threads / 90 songs
258 posts
United Kingdom
Denis wrote…
;s very difficult to get a full tone on the music box.

Maybe it would sound better if I added piano. I might try it. But I do kinda like it 'unfull'. I think it fits.
#6April 13th, 2007 · 06:26 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Lovely piece PD - I think the ending needs work, but that's all.  The vocals are atmospheric, effective, really well delivered, fabulous.
The backing music matches the vocals well.  I don't agree with Denis at all about the mixing or the need for additional instruments.  This song sits well as a break in an album - between to monster classic Porcelain Doll emotive electro vox rock!!!
#7April 13th, 2007 · 08:26 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
PorcelainDoll wrote…
alittlepaperdoll wrote…
omfg i love you!
i have this abnormal obseshion with peter pan, so i jumped on this song when i logged onto the band amp home page, and then i just about dies when i relised that you made it

Oh dear, its not like a Micheal Jackson sized obsession with Peter Pan is it? Ha.
I used to have the nickname 'tink' for a while, as in tinkabelle... I dunno why. Anyway...

no no no of course not lol
i just love the story line, after all whats the one thing we all think when we're 6? "im never going to grow up"
and then we do sadly and its a great let down
but as i like to say
growing old isnt optional, growing up is
lol
#8April 14th, 2007 · 05:00 AM
18 threads / 18 songs
52 posts
Germany
incredible art
i love your lyrics and the singing, this is next level trip-hop, no its more than that! congratulations, my compliments.

I dont wanna vote,
I don't wanna pay tax,
I don't want a baby,
I just want my dolls back,
I don't want a villa by the sea,
Just a wendyhouse'll do for me.

lovely x100!
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