#1May 31st, 2005 · 01:00 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
5 posts
United Kingdom
Im in a Hole
*

This song is not in a battle


Not my greatest acheivment of all time but still quite an "Interestng" one. I dont think much of it, in fact i think its completely rubbish. I mainly posted it to see critique and how it can be improved.

Does this song not follow the Rules? Please Report Abuse
#2June 1st, 2005 · 06:13 PM
15 threads / 11 songs
147 posts
United States of America
Voclas need work. Riffs are decent, that drum beat is weird though. Try using a little more changeup to your song. Its a little repetitive.
#3June 2nd, 2005 · 09:48 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
5 posts
United Kingdom
Well the vocals were me trying to sing with tongsilitus, the drums i tryed to record, cudnt get it in time cos there are SO many lines to it. Multitracking it is practically impossible. And also i cant thinmk of a second riff to this song.... havent written a song in ages... ill give it a go sum time.
Chears,
Mike
#4June 3rd, 2005 · 06:04 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
29 posts
United States of America
guitar in this calls for harder drums.  More snare, less cymbals.
#5June 4th, 2005 · 04:56 AM
8 threads / 7 songs
113 posts
Bangladesh
Agree with jokermanj, needs heavier drums.. replace cymbal beat with double kick drum in sections but use it sparingly! Bass line is great! Keep that.. maybe try to do something a bit different with the guitar to mix things up a bit, keep things interesting.
#6June 5th, 2005 · 10:50 PM
28 threads / 20 songs
255 posts
Australia
get a real dummer man, this sounds heavily like computer drums, and not your average computer drums, but like a REALLY bad software on the computer aswell
#7June 9th, 2005 · 12:02 PM
2 posts
United Kingdom
i cant wait to start posting on here theres some good potential with this but the vocals are rubbish and the drums are hopfully a mechine or sequenced? you need to find a better drum beet for this
#8July 29th, 2005 · 09:03 PM
28 threads / 20 songs
255 posts
Australia
the beginning of this song sounds like some low class janet jackson (when she was fat) song that didn't make the album
#9July 30th, 2005 · 03:12 AM
77 threads / 59 songs
923 posts
Netherlands
i agree with jokerman too, but i do like the guitar-riff! but the singing is bad.., too bad!
Sorry, you do not have access to post...
Wanna post? Join Today!

Server Time: March 29th, 2024 · 9:03 AM
© 2002-2012 BandAMP. All Rights Reserved.