I think I've cured the hiss I was getting in my previous songs, I used my old Yamaha multi-track cassette recorder as a mixer to boost the pre amp on my digital workstation. Please comment on the quality of the recording, I really want to get the best quality out of the equipment I already have
I wrote this song about 25 years ago, added a bridge, which came unintentionally while I was recording it. The bridge is in the wrong place. I do  have a bass line for this song, don't know whether to add it to the song?

I thought the recording was atmospheric    Dunno how to describe it other than that, I could hear a slight echo sound that worked well for the atmosphere. I thought it was very nice, I liked the drums, and the guitar had a flamenco/spanish feel to it.

I think it's a great instrumental.

Also, maybe it's just me, but I could hear this sort of thing in an elevator or a mall.

Cheers

WB

Denis,
Good construction, great playing, very nice bit of music
As far as the recording is concerned, well you're still getting a fair amount of hiss in there!!!

It almost seems like you have some automatic recording level gizmo in there boosting the signal in the quieter bits (although maybe not, as it doesn't get progressively louder at the end).  There's definitely something not right there though!

its alot better than the last song of yours i commented on, but in the long term i think you should aim for better hardware.

concerning the song; very nice. amazing guitar as ever, and i like the percussion, what do you use? it sounds quite woody and not too deep so im guessing just average bongos..

I could listen to this all day

Ian