#1April 9th, 2007 · 12:06 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
Smoke
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This song is not in a battle


Writers Block: Music/Lyrics
Flyer7747: Vocals

Smoke

My heart's stone cold,
My lungs are gone,
My liver's failed,
Because my body's a chemical plant,
My teeth are black,
My skin is white,
My throat is rotting,

Chorus: (direct from verse)
The smoke will claim me through the night,
Surely I'll be alright,
But there's little doubt, that I'm over and out,
And I'm gonna lose the fight,
To the smoke,

My heart's on fire,
My one desire,
I can't go on,
Because me body's burning out,
I can't go on,
My spirit's failed,
I'm dead inside,

Chorus
(direct from verse)
The smoke will claim me through the night,
Surely I'll be alright,
But there's little doubt, that I'm over and out,
And I'm gonna lose the fight,
To the smoke,


Bridge:
No one's gonna save me from the smoke,
No one's gonna know,
No one's gonna save me when I choke,
From the torn up breath of my own,
No one's gonna save me from the smoke,
No one's gonna know,
No one's gonna save me when I choke,
Save me from the smoke,

My heart's stone cold,
My lungs are gone,
My liver's failed,
Because my body's a chemical plant,
My teeth are black,
My skin is white,
My throat is rotting,

Chorus
(direct from verse)
The smoke will claim me through the night,
Surely I'll be alright,
But there's little doubt, that I'm over and out,
And I'm gonna lose the fight,
To the smoke,

Writers Block(Shane)
Lyrics

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#2April 9th, 2007 · 12:13 AM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
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Man, Flyer, your voice is so distinguishing!  Id recognize your vocals anywhere!  Good little colab here guys!  love that little hook you got there, W.
#3April 9th, 2007 · 12:35 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Thanks Minds

Yeah   WB   does have a nice tune going on here
this was fun to do

Flyer
#4April 9th, 2007 · 04:33 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Hey Flyer
It's so cool to see my song like this, pretty much in full. Thanks Flyer, I have to agree with minds about your voice, very unique, I really like how it stands out from the synth sound, which sounds more in the background, which I think it needed to be from the instrumental track.

Cheers buddy.
It was fun for me too.

Thanks Minds.

WB
#5April 12th, 2007 · 06:21 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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I had fun doing this WB..it deff is a change in pace from what I usually do..
Looking forward to working with you some more

Keep it goin
lil man

Flyer
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