#1April 5th, 2007 · 11:06 PM
14 threads / 9 songs
90 posts
United States of America
I am still alive...
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This song is not in a battle


Made in fl studios, there are no lyrics yet. I started trying to learn panning, so listening through headphones allow you to hear it better. Any constructive criticism and comments are welcome.

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#2April 5th, 2007 · 11:53 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Your music writing talent is not too bad. Just pick better instruments and learn velocity mapping and your music will improve greatly.
#3April 6th, 2007 · 12:04 AM
65 threads / 2 songs
1,062 posts
United States of America
Cool, Good effort.  Pretty minimalist.  Agree about needing better sounds.  I work with Fl Studio myself and it just gets better.  Stick with it man.  You'll get there.
#4April 6th, 2007 · 12:13 AM
97 threads / 43 songs
500 posts
Australia
Quite catchy
Nice hooks, plays out quite nicely, some instrument change would be nice, but I do think this is still pretty great.

Good work.

WB
#5April 6th, 2007 · 02:54 AM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Long time no see BH glad to see you at work.Some isuues but nothing that more effort and practice can fix.Really good ideas here though.Hope to here more soon.Panning is happening wich I think was what you were after.Maybe try some of the main instruments too as opose to the background ones.!
#6April 6th, 2007 · 08:45 AM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
this is cool. very dark. im afraid to say i dont like the part which starts at 1.37. it just sounds to artificial. why not keep the drums and backing and play that part over it on guitar. at around 3.00 the drums get a bit monotonous, maybe some snare fills.
 but otherwise a good job. I like the panning, its not too ott, but i dont think it would show up well without headphones.

Ian
#7April 6th, 2007 · 02:00 PM
37 threads / 19 songs
618 posts
United States of America
dang it all
I had to check my calender twice to make sure of what year it is..
I had met these guys on my second trip to europe that turned out
to be some computer game traders named Psygnosis... this sounds
so much like the theme music to one of their games.. they later
became a big software company.. and of course forgot all of the
little people! (lol) naw really Deiter was a kewl guy.. some of you
old tymers might remember who I'm talking about.. always had
some real neat games they programmed themselves..  as good as
any of the commercial releases we all hacked for warez..

Those were the days!!!


Blessings,

Blueyes - Danny
#8April 7th, 2007 · 11:37 PM
48 threads / 7 songs
429 posts
United States of America
kick it man, this is cool, i like it. it is very dark i must admit but its cool to just put on and then relaxe for a few then get ready for the day ahead kind of thing
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