Made in fl studios, there are no lyrics yet. I started trying to learn panning, so listening through headphones allow you to hear it better. Any constructive criticism and comments are welcome.

Your music writing talent is not too bad. Just pick better instruments and learn velocity mapping and your music will improve greatly.

Cool, Good effort.  Pretty minimalist.  Agree about needing better sounds.  I work with Fl Studio myself and it just gets better.  Stick with it man.  You'll get there.

Nice hooks, plays out quite nicely, some instrument change would be nice, but I do think this is still pretty great.

Good work.

WB

Long time no see BH glad to see you at work.Some isuues but nothing that more effort and practice can fix.Really good ideas here though.Hope to here more soon.Panning is happening wich I think was what you were after.Maybe try some of the main instruments too as opose to the background ones.!

this is cool. very dark. im afraid to say i dont like the part which starts at 1.37. it just sounds to artificial. why not keep the drums and backing and play that part over it on guitar. at around 3.00 the drums get a bit monotonous, maybe some snare fills.
 but otherwise a good job. I like the panning, its not too ott, but i dont think it would show up well without headphones.

Ian

I had to check my calender twice to make sure of what year it is..
I had met these guys on my second trip to europe that turned out
to be some computer game traders named Psygnosis... this sounds
so much like the theme music to one of their games.. they later
became a big software company.. and of course forgot all of the
little people! (lol) naw really Deiter was a kewl guy.. some of you
old tymers might remember who I'm talking about.. always had
some real neat games they programmed themselves..  as good as
any of the commercial releases we all hacked for warez..

Those were the days!!!


Blessings,

Blueyes - Danny

kick it man, this is cool, i like it. it is very dark i must admit but its cool to just put on and then relaxe for a few then get ready for the day ahead kind of thing