FINALLY WORKING!!!!!!  many thanks to Wisdom for fixing it 4 me

its a song from my 2 man comedy band Ray Machine. Its me on the guitar and my mate Jed singing

good show... but to quote one of the many many lines I quote from yellow submarine, "needs rehearsal"... 
life is full of many many firsts... it's what we choose to do with these firsts as we experience them..  well one of my firsts came from my german class in high school.. and again something that has stuck with me since.. it is simply "Ubung Macht Den Meister" roughly translated, practice makes the master! steady the course my young brother.. steady the course!


Many Blessings,

Danny - Blueyes

this has potential for sure...and I like your clever twist of saying "raining supreme" as opposed to "reigning supreme"     the recording is terrible though - I had a very difficult time hearing most of it...but the chunky guitar playing sounded pretty good.  Keep at it - you'll get there.

That was really funny! loved the last act! lol
Yes the volume is way too low on the recording but you'll get to that too eventually.
So have you got any more?
I want to hear more fun music       

thanx guys

the reason its terrible quality is cos i we only recorded it on an MP3