Added vocals to the song, improved panning a bit.

on rolling hills and valleys
I wander still through alleys
Wondering  just what I’m made for
I’m not so happy anymore

Rain it falls on me
But it keeps me dry
Cannot see my fate
I have fallen from grace

I feel so real
Yet I’m not
I feel so plain
Yet I’m not
Just what is pain?
I don’t
I don’t know anything
Anymore

Rain it falls on me
But it keeps me dry
Cannot see my fate
I have fallen from grace

Sky hear me now
I’m eager
Earth feed me bread
That’s meager
Just what is time?
I don’t know
I don’t think I know anything
Anymore

Rain it falls on me
But it keeps me dry
Cannot see my fate
I have fallen from grace

Why am I here?
Why am I….

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Man this is really good stuff can tell you how much I enjoy your music The Quality in the Vox is much more crisp and clear.Dude some awesome ideas lay between those headphones of yours.this is great and blah blah blah
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You have a good song here...Nice recording..damn good mix..Nice vocals..
Nice melody...the flow is good...nice lyrics...you vocals fall back just a lil to the back at times...other then That..nice work

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So six-eight is your new gig eh? Chris wants to do that one 6/8 song of yours... It won't sound like this thought. It'll probably sound something more like strange apparition.

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