I just can't get away from 6/8 time. It's another instrumental, mainly because I am having writers block when it comes to lyrics. The beginning is out of time, but I find the last verse to be somewhat inspiring.

Nice flowing feel. I like the progression. I think you should work on the melody, not that it's bad, but perhaps find A couple of nice phrases to make it memorable to give it identity. I think you could improve the production simply working on the pan, some of the melody was hard to hear. Good work!!

Denis

This is BEAUTIFUL. I love 'your sound'.
You know I'd love to put this in my 'instrumentals for a rainy day' folder. 
As for comments on production, I feel it's too much 'one' sound and that each instrument should be more 'defined' in the mix, like Denis said :  "I think you could improve the production simply working on the pan"

This is nice..very good recording
Very nice musical flow
This flows well
This is powerful..with a good touch
as far as not being overpowering
But, done with authority
nice work

gets a good rating

Flyer

Theo you're always giving me all this great feedback but you wright some really good stuff too .I always get something out of compositions.Man this song is really really good.The mix is a little off but Theo this great man!
Hi vote for musical creativity! 

Fabulous quality (although there's a bit of detectable hiss in there, and the snare's a bit "clicky" )
Playing of instruments all good
Sound blending and overall mix is excellent
This just carries you up there with it - real decent stuff.

i like the mix how it is. you've got a very similar sound on all of your songs (not necessarily music wise but like production or whatever -- i don't know much about that stuff so i can't really comment). anyway, i like it.