Why Am I Here? | ![]() ![]() ![]() |
I just can't get away from 6/8 time. It's another instrumental, mainly because I am having writers block when it comes to lyrics. The beginning is out of time, but I find the last verse to be somewhat inspiring.
Flowing |
Nice flowing feel. I like the progression. I think you should work on the melody, not that it's bad, but perhaps find A couple of nice phrases to make it memorable to give it identity. I think you could improve the production simply working on the pan, some of the melody was hard to hear. Good work!!
Denis
Denis
Two for the show |
This is BEAUTIFUL. I love 'your sound'.
You know I'd love to put this in my 'instrumentals for a rainy day' folder.
As for comments on production, I feel it's too much 'one' sound and that each instrument should be more 'defined' in the mix, like Denis said : "I think you could improve the production simply working on the pan"
You know I'd love to put this in my 'instrumentals for a rainy day' folder.

As for comments on production, I feel it's too much 'one' sound and that each instrument should be more 'defined' in the mix, like Denis said : "I think you could improve the production simply working on the pan"
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