this is a demo verison from 2004

overpowered by funk, just funk out

The beat in the beginning was a bit much for me.  Nice guitar though.

Yah the beat is a little much in terms of high frequencies and volume. Nice experimentation though and a sweet acoustic sound. Vocals also need some compression and eq work, other than that its a cool song and decent production

needs work... it's a concept peice to an extent but there is mega distortion going on there for some odd reason. a little more production value would make this a lot more listenable...

also, the vocals need a little work

really good job on the bright acoustic sound

Good but needs to be re-recorded and remixed after some practise. All I have to say.

i don't like the voice box thing, just get a drummer, or borrow one?

it also sounds like you are "redlining" the volume in whatever mixer you are using.

red means stop.

the song itself is quite good tho, if the drums were done by drums, then this song would be damn good!

maybe make the solo a bigger deal too, it could be a sweet climax, just do a little more to add buildup, and then the solo can be the release, it would be a f---in sweet song then.

very orgasmic for the bones in our heart. it make us damp. 3 times! thank off you too much for this soul song tonight.

very nice rythm and drum work.

good ideas but needs some work ... the beat boxing sounds kinda .. weird ... in the song and drums would be much better. The vocals sometime seems out of place or scratchy, so try to work on that. Plus the volume is pretty high you may wanna tune it down a bit. But you've got a really good base for some great stuff here. Keep working on it!

needs real drums, work on levels/production, and vocals, but i like the chorus alot and there are some good ideas here. good guitar tone as well, and great solo.

The vocal beat is a fine placeholder, but I think the general consensus is that the some will have a better treatment with live or even synthed drums.

The biggest problem here is that the song sounds empty with absolutely no bass where there's clearly meant to be -- I think this song could be great if given a better treatment. I listened to it twice and it's scoring fairly well, so obviously you've got a sapling of a fine song. Good stuff man.