trumpet, percussion and organ samples courtesy of freesound.
post lyrics in a bit.

peace
x

Well put together this is cool stuff how do you do this

where is the doll in all this?
aaah there she is............
your voice just lifts the sound
more u

great work

bust out of rep loopin if u can!!!!

splash

Because I don't have anything better to do ha. I've become a bitch hermit of late.

Lyrics:
I put my face on, I don't know why I bother.
Cause everyday, I feel more like my mother.
I go to the bus stop, pay my fare in copper
I sit myself down, and get eyeballed by a slapper.
Miss half-naked 'St Tropez',
Staring like you've got something to say,
Looking down your nose at me, oh.
Tell me girl if you're so above me,
Why are you on the same bus as me?
Surely girls like you have sports cars?
I get to the club, and I don't have my ID
They let busty 14 year olds in,
But they don't like the look of me.
I try to use some girlie charm,
But it doesn't work when,
You've got a boys haircut.
The bastard said, just move along miss.
I should've stayed in bed, tonights taking the piss yeah.
Checking out the minors Mr bouncer,
Shat on my saturday,
Looking down your nose at me.

What a chilled song and indeed well constructed, nice sounds.
I got something with the clicking on the very first sample though.

Love the lyrics, I can even relate to most of them, but from a male point of view! How often have I been turned away from clubs, had to wait around a corner for a 'girl'! God how childish!!! 

Yea! some people were meant to be Hermits or Hermitmisis! 

'Open the curtains, go out side!' was suggested to me by a good friend, I of course interpreted it as 'Open the 'curtains' of your "Windows" and "go Outside" !! 

Oh what a good song....
all done with samples?
you have it in you.... go outside and celebrate with the people around you this damned good work.

btw... it needs another ending

Yeah, I'm not too keen on the ending either. I was going to ask for someone to put a guitar part in it. I don't know where though, it might be a bit short.
The bass and piano part done by me in FL, I think the rest is samples as far as I can remember. (It was only yestaday, but I've slept since then)

As for celebrating my music with those around me...None of my friends really seem too keen on it to be honest, they're mostly all rockers 

This is damn good.  I love the way it starts out then builds all the way till the vocals.  Then it is a groove time with some beautiful vocals.  I have always liked your voice it's so smooth and silky (I don't know any other way to describe it). 

 I think this kicks A$$ and get's a high vote from me. 

I do think TK is right though you might want to rework the end ..maybe to more of a build then release thing.

By the way if those are pics of you (I'm an old guy, so I'm not hitting on you)  you look beautiful . you have great eyes.

wicked lyrics.....

Great use of FL and Freesound loops.
This is superbly put together musically.
The vocals are sublime and close to perfect (and I love the effects you use - not overstated)
I really don't like faded endings, but it's not so bad really.
And the lyrics are, as aetherius points out, "Wicked"

Great song PD - but stop being a hermit bitch; go out and see some people.  Oh, and if you go to a club remember your ID (even if it is a fake one!!!)

I knew from the first two seconds I was going to love this.
Nice scape of sound,  Trumpet sounds a bit distant compared to the rest of the mix.

Weird music for the lyrics!
Vocals are nice, reminds me of more a performance (due to the lyrics and sound) than of a session/record.

Wow! I love the lyrics! Ah.... I remember when I was studying in America, my friend got a false ID for me to get in (he he he... that was long time ago)

your voice has really sweet edge. I love this song! I voted too