So Sorry |
I began with the acoustic guitar a few months ago, and finally got around to adding some lyrics to it. The spooky thing about this track is that in the lyrics there is a line about a text message and I actually got one while I was recording the song. I have thought about adding more lyrics to the tune, but I feel it may be too long, although at the moment I think it's too short. Hoping for some compromise and some comments from you please.
Pink Floyd |
Hiker wrote…
It reminds me something like Pink Floyd in some way.
Marino wrote…
Hey Dennis
Sounds pretty flowing.Maybe doing some entended instrumentals betwen the vox changes might help extend the song.But it does sound good to me.Great writting skills
Voted!
Thanx for you vote.
Denis
wow
great recording quality for the guitar.
did you record your voice while playing guitar? if you did so I would admit you to try recording vocals to a single track. It CAN sound different.
good composition.
*edit*
the song is not too short
great recording quality for the guitar.
did you record your voice while playing guitar? if you did so I would admit you to try recording vocals to a single track. It CAN sound different.
good composition.
*edit*
the song is not too short
So Sad, so good! |
Absolutely! This is an excellent song! Really!
I really hope your going to work at it a bit more (refine it)!
I can definitely hear the Floyd influence and funny enough your voice has a Geldof feel to it, same tones but he's Irish.
I would absolutely love to go through your lyrics (collab?) with you / for you!
Though I find "text me" a bit odd it sort of fits.. it's because it's a 'modern' word in a 'classic' song.
I like the idea of an 'all out' instrumental break in there!
Yes I do think this is an excellent 'classic' song!
I really hope your going to work at it a bit more (refine it)!
I can definitely hear the Floyd influence and funny enough your voice has a Geldof feel to it, same tones but he's Irish.
I would absolutely love to go through your lyrics (collab?) with you / for you!
Though I find "text me" a bit odd it sort of fits.. it's because it's a 'modern' word in a 'classic' song.
I like the idea of an 'all out' instrumental break in there!
Yes I do think this is an excellent 'classic' song!
TritonKeyboarder wrote…
wow
great recording quality for the guitar.
did you record your voice while playing guitar? if you did so I would admit you to try recording vocals to a single track. It CAN sound different.
good composition.
*edit*
the song is not too short
Thanx for your nice comments
Denis
re: So Sad, so good! |
kings wrote…
Absolutely! This is an excellent song! Really!
I really hope your going to work at it a bit more (refine it)!
I can definitely hear the Floyd influence and funny enough your voice has a Geldof feel to it, same tones but he's Irish.
I would absolutely love to go through your lyrics (collab?) with you / for you!
Though I find "text me" a bit odd it sort of fits.. it's because it's a 'modern' word in a 'classic' song.
I like the idea of an 'all out' instrumental break in there!
Yes I do think this is an excellent 'classic' song!
I was hoping somebody would approach me to collaborate, it's better coming from you as I feel you would have more passion Etc. Please contact me.
Thanx.
Denis
re: very nice |
TomFool wrote…
I enjoyed it thoroughly. The Pink Floydish-ness is very palatable though. Don't know if that was intentional. Nicely played and performed. Good work!
It was not intentional to sound like Pink Floyd, but when I was creating it some of the chord changes it did feel like Floyd. I think this happens a lot in all music creations.
Thanks for your comments.
Denis
O passion I would have !!! Definitely for your work, because you put so much of your own in, there's loads more room for more!! lol
I am literally listening to your stuff 'all day', now I'm here , the thought occurred to me, it's like you've been inspired by one line in one Floyd song and you've stretched it out into your own song/space/emotion !
What I believe true inspiration is about, not nicking a bass line and sampling it for money in the charts but taking a moment from such a mystical thing as a song and 'opening' it up into a 'new' room/song, a bit like 'how it all works' anyway, as above so below and all that, sparks of energy bursting out to collide with bursts of energy etc etc....any road..I'd still love to do some thing with you on this one , but then I could say that for most of your stuff.
I am literally listening to your stuff 'all day', now I'm here , the thought occurred to me, it's like you've been inspired by one line in one Floyd song and you've stretched it out into your own song/space/emotion !
What I believe true inspiration is about, not nicking a bass line and sampling it for money in the charts but taking a moment from such a mystical thing as a song and 'opening' it up into a 'new' room/song, a bit like 'how it all works' anyway, as above so below and all that, sparks of energy bursting out to collide with bursts of energy etc etc....any road..I'd still love to do some thing with you on this one , but then I could say that for most of your stuff.
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