Butterflies.
I can't write descriptions anymore. I really like this though!

nice start
i review as i listen
computer......... tight sound
where is porcelain doll?????
add a voc to this.........
you are learning so much next step must be your voice!!!!
btw
on tech front
the master level is probably too loud as the song clips all the time on the bass notes ..................this possibly due 2 2 much volume on master on transfer 2 mp3.... or over mix of the basss part ???? hope of help............

the full sound is mushy........with clipping

splas.......

please sing again

What do you use?

This is nice.
love the feel on it
Little bassi and muffled but great piece.
I'm impressed actually

Loveliness! This is so cool! You've gotten really really good!

and i agree with swordfish, wanna hear your voice here.

Really liked this, it's different and totally relaxing!
I'd REALLY sit down and listen to the music before you 'just' 'put vocals' to it! Less is more!
A few sentences effected into the mix could be awesome!

Nice feel and and overall sound.
Pretty well constructed
Mostly I like this one, but it really needs more - vocals will do it I guess - they're sadly lacking here

So, I've not really said anything different to anyone else then!!!