#1March 20th, 2007 · 05:22 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
6 posts
United States of America
that girl that moved away
Score: n/a
Rank: 1st
Battle: 2007-04

This is a pretty simplistic, good natured song recorded on an even more simplistic computer microphone.

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#2March 20th, 2007 · 05:31 PM
159 threads / 14 songs
2,309 posts
United Kingdom
re: that girl that moved away
hey this is so relaxin.......lovely guitar
great story song
i vote
more please u sound like its so easy to to trip with your guitar.........nice harmonica a real live performance
lyrics real nice......great control
thank you

Wellcome to the Amp
#3March 20th, 2007 · 05:56 PM
340 threads / 59 songs
4,344 posts
United Kingdom
Very nice song, very chilled indeed.
I really like it, but for the way you raised and cut-off the last word in most of the lines, it actually started to irritate me.
Sounds like you just need to practice holding a few notes.
Like swordfish said "please more" 
#4March 20th, 2007 · 09:19 PM
373 posts
good folk appeal... nice balance between your guitar and vox...

Hai Ke Yi
#5March 20th, 2007 · 10:54 PM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
Nice ...reminds me of Neil Young at the beginning with the harmonica...nice recording
This is good....I dunno but I may have missed something as to why you are redoing this..this is so live
I'm adding this to my play list...If you redo this song..I'll probably add that one also
gets a good rating

#6March 21st, 2007 · 10:06 AM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,802 posts
go into a studio and record this song. if there are more of these then you are definately a story teller in music.
#7April 8th, 2007 · 09:42 AM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Laid back feel, very relaxed.
Well played, good sound to the guitar.

A sunny Sunday sitting in a pub garden with a few friends and a few drinks sort of song.

#8April 16th, 2007 · 12:06 PM
102 threads / 59 songs
204 posts
Really nice song. I really like the dialogue at the beginning gives the whole song a really laid back feel right from the beginning, like your sitting in on a light jam session. Really good song, great lyrics, and great vocals. I wouldn't have minded to hear a bridge or something somewhere because the guitar lick gets a little dull after three minutes though it seems that that is really the point to some extent. The last verse is also especially well written. Well done, add more.
#9April 16th, 2007 · 08:20 PM
127 threads / 43 songs
2,808 posts
Puerto Rico
Beautiful song This really chilling.It does carry the story telling feel to it.I personally think that's and asset in a songwriter..Great job!
#10April 16th, 2007 · 11:28 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
Your Bio says " I like good music"

   Well, I do as well, and I must say, I like this....  Fantastic....

          Very nice....  I am waiting anxiously for more from you....  Please don't leave us waiting too long..


#11April 22nd, 2007 · 10:12 AM
7 posts
wow.. folky, yes... the way you sing even reminds me of grandmaster bob dylan sometimes
the lyrics are great.. perfect for this kind of music... a storyteller.. as said before... great!
#12April 23rd, 2007 · 06:09 PM
20 threads / 18 songs
159 posts
United States of America
Well done. A very simple song and very believable. I don't PARTICULARLY like that sort of "bark" emphasis you put on a single word in the middle of each verse, but at the same time I understand that it was this little nuance that sort of set this song apart from similar songs. I liked it a lot.
#13April 24th, 2007 · 12:22 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
14 posts
oh gosh...

I have to say this song moved me...
I love these "simple songs", I mean... Do you know what I mean?
Just guitar and voice and that's it.
And mouth organ, of course. Isn't that mouth organ?

Thank you for making me feel serene in this chaotic world.

I hope I hear more from you soon.

Thank you.
#14April 27th, 2007 · 04:07 AM
110 threads / 55 songs
463 posts
This is definitely very good great feel in the recording
There's a market for such a quality song out there down to you to get in it
I like it a lot!!!
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