hrm well it's recorded really well and stuff but it's kind of boring. Maybe with some lyrics or something it would be more interesting, but as an instrumental piece it's kind of repetitive, especially the beginning "verse" thing, maybe cut that in half or something.
to me its not boring. imo the solo guitar out of tune and bit too aggressive in this nice song. doesnt fit in some phrases. too much solo, sorry
this song needs a female power voice
You can start sth with it. wishing you success.
this song needs a female power voice
You can start sth with it. wishing you success.
Gimme some more! 
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the solo part can easily be a vocal melody at some points...
I do think the solo guitar should be played with more emotion/feeling.
Really liking the music ....owh now it's becoming more aggressive SHAME
I like the aggressive part on his own..but it doesn't fit the rest of the song...
try working on lyrics and a vocal line and i think you got yourself a nice song
I do think the solo guitar should be played with more emotion/feeling.
Really liking the music ....owh now it's becoming more aggressive SHAME
I like the aggressive part on his own..but it doesn't fit the rest of the song...
try working on lyrics and a vocal line and i think you got yourself a nice song
Its pretty good, I would never really listen to this stuff as for pure enjoyment but it does sound like those virtuoso guitarists, Joe Satriani and all them.
I liked the beginning, the lead guitar was doing a pretty good job, there's nothing really to hold on to in it though, nothing that stands out.
Also the lead guitar is too thin, when you added the bulky distorted rhythm guitar on the later part, the lead guitar didn't go bulky enough, I think you had the intention of that part being very crazy and insane, which you nearly hit spot on, other than the lead guitar didn't come to the front, rather went to the back and all that was in front of you then was the rhythm guitar.
Overall good stuff though, can't say it's the most original song I have ever heard because most if not all people have heard the virtuoso guitarists play songs very similar to this, but it's a skill in itself to be able to make something that similar to them cause they are pretty damn good, so are you though, good work on the guitar.
I liked the beginning, the lead guitar was doing a pretty good job, there's nothing really to hold on to in it though, nothing that stands out.
Also the lead guitar is too thin, when you added the bulky distorted rhythm guitar on the later part, the lead guitar didn't go bulky enough, I think you had the intention of that part being very crazy and insane, which you nearly hit spot on, other than the lead guitar didn't come to the front, rather went to the back and all that was in front of you then was the rhythm guitar.
Overall good stuff though, can't say it's the most original song I have ever heard because most if not all people have heard the virtuoso guitarists play songs very similar to this, but it's a skill in itself to be able to make something that similar to them cause they are pretty damn good, so are you though, good work on the guitar.
I love the backing track . I think the soloing is well played . It's a little out front at times and the sounds is not as warm as the music . The back and forth panning is a little distracting at times. But overall the music is real good.
Your playing in the solo is real good.
Your playing in the solo is real good.
Overall, pretty nice piece that's well constructed and played.
As others have said, perhaps the solo guitar sound is not quite in keeping with the other instrumental sounds. And some vocals wouldn't be out of place in there either.
(Oh and I agree with TK, although it's really well played, the solo guitar is out of tune with the other instruments)
As others have said, perhaps the solo guitar sound is not quite in keeping with the other instrumental sounds. And some vocals wouldn't be out of place in there either.
(Oh and I agree with TK, although it's really well played, the solo guitar is out of tune with the other instruments)
This is a very nice song, but I also think it would be great with some vocals. I don't see any tuning problems with the solo guitar, but like I said, if you add in some lyrics it would be really great.
I really like the transition into the "harder" (for lack of a better word) part, and back into the softer one. That transition was nicely done, so good work with that.
The ending seems kind of sudden to me. Maybe add just a couple more measures before you fade out. It just feels like somethings missing.
I still don't see any problems with tuning, but I could be wrong about that. Overall its a great song man, keep it up.
I really like the transition into the "harder" (for lack of a better word) part, and back into the softer one. That transition was nicely done, so good work with that.
The ending seems kind of sudden to me. Maybe add just a couple more measures before you fade out. It just feels like somethings missing.
I still don't see any problems with tuning, but I could be wrong about that. Overall its a great song man, keep it up.
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Some of the pops on the bass sound odd to me for some reason, and the double bass on the drums sounded weird to me also but it's a nice song. I like it..
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