#1March 12th, 2007 · 03:16 AM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
Outside
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This song is not in a battle


Inspired slightly by Dave Matthews Band. I apologize for the midi piano and singing. I was not happy with the mix.

Lyrics:
I am outside
Looking in, Looking in
At you
But you were never really there
I am inside
Looking out, looking out
At the world
But I can never seem to reach it yeah
Outside
Outside
Outside
Outside
Outisde
Outside
Outside
The trees speak so
Softly now
And I am amongst the leaves
But I can never hear them
Sun shines on the
Mountaintops  and everything is great
But I can never really see
Outside
Outside

I am alone
Looking through looking through
The grass
But I can’t see you anymore
You are alone
Looking through looking through
The sky
But you never really see me anymore
Outside
Outside
Outside

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#2March 12th, 2007 · 07:56 AM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Yeah some minor mix issues but this song is great.Awesome awesome song.Wow!
#3March 14th, 2007 · 05:11 PM
30 threads / 5 songs
757 posts
Australia
wow
Reminisant of some of my fave 60s flower power artists .You know you've got a bit of a Donivan vibe on this one.
structure and composition great piano didn't worry me as it sounded from an era and the vox kinda settles style suits your voice well.
 May be just sing the song over and over till it's you.I really like this , sucker for3/4 
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