This poem was written by a 10th grader in the school I work at. I put it to music. (all 1 min 15 seconds)  Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

Wishes
Wasted stars on all the wishes
That never could come true

Wasted dreams on all the things
That never could hope to

Wasted tears one all the times
You never should have cried

Wasted things they say
Wasted life away

But you smile as you stand
Wasting wishes at your well

Tossing pennies in and
Over thinking silly things

Childish Hopes and dreams
They say your life was wasted still

They say your life was wasted
But it was wasted well 

- Text by J.C.

J.C. has got potential.... Keep that kid going...
soft and subtle music, a bit sad...
works pretty good...


Hai Ke Yi

Very nice, Tom...Nice hook in the lyrics, and a great sentiment. Wasted well...like my time on the amp...maybe JC will lend another verse?

Thanks!

This is really nice
Im Liking it
your voice reminds me of
Harry Chappin

Nice work


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