an older live version

I think your vox could use a little work, but all in all, a great tune. Keep jammin. I'll be looking for more of your stuff

Good tune, improve vocals, in rythm phrasing and execution precision.

Good rythm.  Vocals are bit off tune in sections but in a Bright Eyes way which can work but need polished.

Vocals need work. I understand this is a live version and it might be put down to nerves. Just get as much confidence into that voice as is in the rhythm guitar and you'll be right!

The line vocal is certainly influenced by the fact that you sing and play simultaneously but I liked this song very much. Excellent work!

a bit nasal, but it's still a pretty good song.. just work at it..

Well, I suppose your lyrics and rhythm weren't so bad.