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about the beat generation in a way sort of. i'm reading naked lunch right now which is what the last part is all about basically.
i uploaded this last night, but i was really tired when i did it and it wasn't really as done as i would have liked it to be. this is after a little while longer of tinkering on it this afternoon.
lyrics:
where are you going???
everyone is always so romantic. everyone is always a fanatic. they wanna be the best they can be. they wanna be better than me: go ahead.
nothing on earth is dramatic. it is all just re-enactment. nothing on earth is new it's been done before, you too.
he walks in cool, sly, addictive. he can talk and move and groove. he walks in cool, sly, addictive like stereophonic amplitude. everyone looks and looks and looks. they're buying what he's selling.
twenty-something and no job.
twenty-something, hair long.
living off coffee.
drinking your own blood.
rutting in circles.
running upside down.
WHERE DO I GO FROM HERE???
there's a doctor in the corner
white hot knives,
cold steel C R Y S T A L L I Z E D
digging out babies
paying off mothers
paying off rent
paying off junkies
with junk and plastic. . .
the gutters of tomorrow are the sidewalks of today!!!!!??
the lover loves;
the sinner sins;;
. . .the poet dies
where does it end?
i uploaded this last night, but i was really tired when i did it and it wasn't really as done as i would have liked it to be. this is after a little while longer of tinkering on it this afternoon.
lyrics:
where are you going???
everyone is always so romantic. everyone is always a fanatic. they wanna be the best they can be. they wanna be better than me: go ahead.
nothing on earth is dramatic. it is all just re-enactment. nothing on earth is new it's been done before, you too.
he walks in cool, sly, addictive. he can talk and move and groove. he walks in cool, sly, addictive like stereophonic amplitude. everyone looks and looks and looks. they're buying what he's selling.
twenty-something and no job.
twenty-something, hair long.
living off coffee.
drinking your own blood.
rutting in circles.
running upside down.
WHERE DO I GO FROM HERE???
there's a doctor in the corner
white hot knives,
cold steel C R Y S T A L L I Z E D
digging out babies
paying off mothers
paying off rent
paying off junkies
with junk and plastic. . .
the gutters of tomorrow are the sidewalks of today!!!!!??
the lover loves;
the sinner sins;;
. . .the poet dies
where does it end?
| Cool |
Comment as i hear......OK......?
voice down in the mix
so far its gone nice riff..........short
vocs + riff...........OK
bit dis jointed
chorus type vocs ......cool.....nice
the whole songs full of good ideas
disjointed and poor mix re vocals (should never lose them behind guitars)
THIS IS COOL
kersplash
positive
voice down in the mix
so far its gone nice riff..........short
vocs + riff...........OK
bit dis jointed
chorus type vocs ......cool.....nice
the whole songs full of good ideas
disjointed and poor mix re vocals (should never lose them behind guitars)
THIS IS COOL
kersplash
positive
Hey thanks for the comment, I like your response style a lot, very stream of consciousness 
The vocals in the beginning and the end were put in the background on purpose just because I wanted them there for the sound more than anything, not really the words, and because I wanted the music to be like the focal point for those parts of the song.
The vocals in the beginning and the end were put in the background on purpose just because I wanted them there for the sound more than anything, not really the words, and because I wanted the music to be like the focal point for those parts of the song.
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